Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like to taking picture of the reviews because it's helped me to remember moments and places. For example, I often photograph sunsets to capture the mood and later look at the picture to recall how I felt.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I prefer rural views because it's peaceful than city and I need to relax in quiet environment to relax, recharge and clear my mind. For example, I like to walking on the field or sitting by leg.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
It depends on how much time I have. It's I got limited time. I prefer to visit on my country because it's more convenient. If I have plenty of time, I prefer to abort to new experience and meet some new people.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 用更自然和准确的句子表达,注意语法(动词形式、冠词和单复数)并避免多余词。回答时先给出直接回应,再用一到两句具体细节支持,并使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me remember special moments and places. For instance, I often photograph sunsets to capture the mood, and later I look at the photos to recall how I felt at that time.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 纠正语法错误并精简表达:先直接回答偏好,然后用1–2个具体、连贯的理由支持,避免重复(如“relax”出现两次)。细节要更准确(如“walking in the fields”而不是“walking on the field”)。
Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they are much quieter and more peaceful than cities. For example, I enjoy walking in the fields or sitting by a river to relax and recharge my mind.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 改正语法和词汇错误,使表达更自然:用清晰的主题句说明条件,再用连接词展开原因。避免错误短语(如“abort to new experience”)并用准确搭配(如“explore new places”)。
Ví dụ: It depends on how much time I have. If I have limited time, I prefer to stay in my country because it's more convenient. But if I have plenty of time, I like to travel abroad to explore new places and meet new people.
× Yes, I like to taking picture of the reviews because it's helped me to remember moments and places.
✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of the views because it helps me remember moments and places.
错误类型:动词 + -ing 形式以及名词复数和时态问题。说明:短语 “like to taking” 混用了不定式和动名词,正确形式应为 “like + doing” 或 “like to do”。“picture” 在此处应为复数 “pictures” 来表示多次拍摄;“reviews” 应为 “views”(风景),原词用错;“it's helped me” 使用了现在完成时但上下文描述习惯性行为应使用一般现在时,改为 “it helps me remember”。建议:使用 “like taking pictures of the views” 和一般现在时描述常态。
× For example, I often photograph sunsets to capture the mood and later look at the picture to recall how I felt.
✓ For example, I often photograph sunsets to capture the mood and later look at the pictures to recall how I felt.
错误类型:冠词/可数名词复数形式。说明:“the picture” 在此处应指多张照片,使用复数 “the pictures” 更符合语境;若指特定一张也需明确。建议:若泛指多张照片,用复数;若指某一张,用 “the picture” 并在上下文中明确。
× I prefer rural views because it's peaceful than city and I need to relax in quiet environment to relax, recharge and clear my mind.
✓ I prefer rural views because they are more peaceful than the city, and I need to relax in a quiet environment to recharge and clear my mind.
错误类型:There be/代词和比较结构以及冠词问题。说明:“it's peaceful than city” 结构错误:比较级需用 “more + adj” 或在单数第三人称结构外使用复数主语;这里主语是复数 “rural views”,应用 “they are more peaceful than the city” 或将 “the city” 前加定冠词。同时 “in quiet environment” 缺少冠词,正确为 “in a quiet environment”。句中重复使用 “to relax” 冗余,保留一次即可。建议:注意主谓一致,比较级结构和可数名词的冠词使用。
× For example, I like to walking on the field or sitting by leg.
✓ For example, I like walking in the fields or sitting by the lake.
错误类型:动词 + -ing 形式及介词和名词用法错误。说明:“like to walking” 错误,应为 “like walking” 或 “like to walk”;“on the field” 在习惯用法中更自然为 “in the fields” 表示在田野里散步;“sitting by leg” 明显用词错误,应为 “sitting by the lake”(或其他合理名词如 ‘river’)。建议:使用 “like walking in the fields” 并注意名词的正确选择与介词搭配。
× It depends on how much time I have. It's I got limited time.
✓ It depends on how much time I have. If I have limited time, ...
错误类型:现在时/过去时混用与句子结构问题。说明:“It's I got limited time” 语法混乱,错误地将现在时和过去时混合并且句子不通顺。改为 “If I have limited time” 使用一般现在时来表达条件(与第一句一致)。建议:保持时态一致,使用条件句 “If I have limited time” 来衔接上下文。
× I prefer to visit on my country because it's more convenient.
✓ I prefer to visit my country because it is more convenient.
错误类型:介词与冠词使用。说明:“visit on my country” 中多余的介词 “on” 不应出现;“my country” 前通常不加冠词,直接说 “visit my country”。建议:删除不必要的介词,保持简单的动词+宾语结构。
× If I have plenty of time, I prefer to abort to new experience and meet some new people.
✓ If I have plenty of time, I prefer to embrace new experiences and meet new people.
错误类型:动词用法和名词形式。说明:“prefer to abort to” 用词错误,abort 意为中止,与语境不符;“to new experience” 名词单复数和介词搭配错误,应该是 “embrace new experiences” 或 “seek new experiences”。建议:使用语义恰当的动词(embrace, seek)并用复数 “experiences” 与 “meet new people” 搭配。