Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and expresses reasons, but it is slightly long-winded and ends with an unfinished phrase. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, one or two concise supporting details, and avoid redundancy. Also correct the trailing conjunction and vary your vocabulary (e.g., use 'scenery' or 'landscape features').

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because it helps me remember places I visit. For example, taking a photo of a coastal sunset preserves the colours and mood, so I can relive the experience later.

Gợi ý: Good answer with clear preference and supporting reasons. To improve, make your response more concise, combine related ideas with linking words, and add a brief specific example to make it vivid. Avoid repeating general words like 'beauty' and 'landscapes.'

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because the quiet villages and dark skies create breathtaking scenery. For instance, photographing a mountain sunrise in the countryside lets me capture dramatic colours and peaceful atmosphere without city lights.

Gợi ý: Your answer gives a clear preference and reason, but it contains minor awkward phrasing and repetition ('other countries' repeated). Improve by using more precise vocabulary (e.g., 'unique landscapes' or 'novel scenes') and give a brief example of a foreign view you found appealing to support your point.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering unique landscapes I haven't seen before. For example, I loved photographing the colourful markets and coastal cliffs when I visited Portugal, which felt very different from home.

× 'Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me remember the place I have visited and it also helps me capture the beauty of a certain landscape and.'

✓ 'Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me remember the places I have visited and also help me capture the beauty of certain landscapes.'

'Sentence structure is awkward and contains redundancy and an extra conjunction at the end. The subject "taking pictures of different views" is plural in meaning, so use plural pronouns/verbs (they help). Replace "the place I have visited" with plural "the places I have visited" to match "different views." Remove the trailing "and." Combine the two clauses to avoid repetition: "they help... and also help..." Suggestion: simplify similar compound sentences by using parallel structure and consistent plurality.'

× 'I prefer views in rural areas because there is something breathtaking about the villages, how peaceful it is without the interference of light pollution.'

✓ 'I prefer views in rural areas because there is something breathtaking about the villages and how peaceful they are without the interference of light pollution.'

'Subject-verb agreement and sentence structure error: "the villages" is plural, so the pronoun and verb should be plural (they are), not "it is." Also use a conjunction to join the two ideas smoothly ("and how peaceful they are"). Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree with their antecedents and maintain parallel structure when listing qualities.'

× 'I also love the beauty of it and the landscapes.'

✓ 'I also love their beauty and the landscapes.'

'Incorrect use of pronoun/adjective: "of it" is unclear and mismatches the plural subject "villages/landscapes." Use a plural possessive pronoun "their" to refer back to the villages or views. Alternatively rewrite as "I also love the beauty of the landscapes." Suggestion: make pronoun number agree with the noun it replaces and prefer explicit phrasing.'

× 'The hills and the mountainous regions also interest me a lot.'

✓ 'The hills and mountainous regions also interest me a lot.'

'Minor sentence structure/redundancy issue: "the hills and the mountainous regions" is repetitive; omit the extra "the" and keep parallel nouns. This makes the sentence more natural. Suggestion: avoid unnecessary articles when listing similar items.'

× 'I prefer views in other countries because there is something exotic about the other countries.'

✓ 'I prefer views in other countries because there is something exotic about them.'

'Awkward repetition and tense/word choice: repeating "other countries" is redundant. Replace the second instance with the pronoun "them." This keeps present tense and reads more naturally. Suggestion: avoid repeating nouns unnecessarily; use pronouns for cohesion.'

× 'In terms of that I have never seen most of the scenes before and also it's interesting for me to explore different places.'

✓ 'Because I have never seen most of those scenes before, it is interesting for me to explore different places.'

'Sentence structure and cohesion errors: "In terms of that" is unnatural in English; use "Because" or "Since." Replace "most of the scenes" with "most of those scenes" for clarity. Use "it is interesting for me to" (avoid contraction in formal speech) or more natural "I find it interesting to explore different places." Suggestion: begin with a clear conjunction to show reason and use demonstratives (those) to refer back to previously mentioned scenes.'