Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cần cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản, phát âm rõ ràng và cấu trúc câu logic. Trả lời nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó thêm 1–2 câu hỗ trợ rõ ràng với linking words (ví dụ: because, for example, so). Tránh lặp từ (ví dụ: "I I") và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác (ví dụ: "memories", "angles", "capture" thay vì "reserve the chasing clothes"). Hãy sửa lỗi về mạo từ và chia động từ, đồng thời giới hạn câu không quá 4–5 câu để tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they become lasting memories and help me see familiar places from new angles. For example, I often photograph city skylines at sunset to capture dramatic colors, and I take landscape shots when I go hiking to record the scenery.

Gợi ý: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, cải thiện tính mạch lạc và dùng liên từ hợp lý (because, so, for example). Sử dụng vocab chính xác để mô tả địa điểm (ví dụ: "attractions", "landmarks") và tránh câu dài lủng củng. Thêm ví dụ cụ thể ngắn gọn để làm rõ lý do và kiểm soát ngữ pháp chủ-động từ.

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I live in a city and there are more famous attractions to see. For example, places like Old Quarter and popular lakes offer interesting landmarks and activities, so I can enjoy and photograph more varied scenes.

Gợi ý: Cần nói rõ lý do cụ thể và dùng cấu trúc câu chính xác. Tránh phát âm hoặc viết sai tên địa danh; nếu không chắc, dùng cụm từ chung (e.g., "many provinces"). Thêm linking word và một câu minh họa để câu trả lời đủ thông tin nhưng ngắn gọn. Kiểm soát ngữ pháp (articles, plural forms) và từ vựng (e.g., "famous places", "provinces").

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because Vietnam has many famous places and diverse provinces to explore. For example, I enjoy visiting coastal areas and mountain towns where I can experience local culture and beautiful landscapes.

× Yes, I I enjoy taking pictures different views because for the roughly have become picturesque memories and see familiar places from my new angels.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they have become picturesque memories and let me see familiar places from new angles.

The sentence has multiple structure and word-choice problems. Remove the duplicate 'I'. Add the preposition 'of' after 'pictures' (preposition error, ID 11). Replace 'for the roughly have become' with 'they have become' to provide a clear subject and correct tense (sentence structure and subject-verb agreement, ID 26 and 27). Use 'let me see' for clear meaning and 'angles' instead of 'angels' (word choice/spelling, ID 13). Suggestion: simplify clauses, ensure each clause has a clear subject and verb, and check common prepositions and vocabulary.

× For example, I often photograph city skylines at sunset to reserve the chasing clothes and I also take landscape shots when a hiking.

✓ For example, I often photograph city skylines at sunset to preserve the changing colors, and I also take landscape shots when hiking.

'To reserve the chasing clothes' is incorrect vocabulary and likely intended 'to preserve the changing colors' (word choice error, ID 13). Use 'hiking' without 'a' because 'hiking' here is a gerund indicating activity (verb + -ing form, ID 8). Also add a comma before 'and' to join two independent clauses (sentence structure, ID 26). Suggestion: use correct collocations ('preserve the colors') and omit the article before gerunds.

× I prefer views in urban areas because I live in urban areas so we have more place famous play places like Old Qatar and Huang Kim Lake and Huang Gimmick.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because I live there, so we have more famous places to visit, like Old Quarter, Hoang Kim Lake, and Hoang Gimmick.

'more place famous play places' is unclear and contains pluralization and word-order errors. Use 'more famous places' (singular/plural ordering and adjective placement, IDs 1 and 18). Replace repeated 'urban areas' with 'there' for conciseness (pronoun use, ID 12). Correct 'Old Qatar' to 'Old Quarter' and 'Huang' to 'Hoang' if those are proper names (word choice/spelling, ID 13). Suggestion: use 'more famous places to visit' to convey intent and ensure noun numbers match context.

× So we want we can experience and take more.

✓ So we can experience and take more photos.

The original has redundant and incorrect pronoun usage ('we want we can') and lacks a clear object. Replace with 'we can' and specify 'photos' as the object (pronoun and sentence structure errors, IDs 12 and 26). Suggestion: avoid repeating subjects; state the modal or ability ('can') and include the direct object.

× I prefer views in my own country because in Vietnam we have a lot of places famous and we have a lot of province too, like Guang Ning Bing province.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because in Vietnam we have a lot of famous places and many provinces too, like Guang Ning Bing Province.

The phrase 'places famous' has incorrect adjective order; correct is 'famous places' (order of adjectives, ID 18). 'A lot of province' should be plural 'many provinces' (singular/plural and quantifier use, IDs 1 and 14). Capitalize 'Province' if part of the proper name. Suggestion: use 'many provinces' or 'a lot of provinces' and place adjectives before nouns.