Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
I don't like taking pictures of different views. I don't like taking pictures in general, so I don't carry with me a a camera or I don't use the cell phone to take photos of different moments in fact. So when I need a photo, I always ask.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I prefer urban views over rural views because I grew up in Montevideo, which is the capital of Uruguay. I am and I'm not really familiar with the ruler areas or feel, so I I like to go to the rambler.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer using another countries, uh, although I like the views of my own country, but I love, uh, traveling around and go to visit, uh, different places and countries. So, uh, I really enjoy going to. View.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Mejorar la fluidez y corregir errores gramaticales y de pronunciación. Evita repetición y usa oraciones más concisas con conectores (por ejemplo: however, so, therefore). Practica eliminar muletillas y repeticiones ('I don't like taking pictures' dicho varias veces) y corrige artículos y duplicaciones ('a a camera'). Intenta dar una razón clara y un ejemplo breve para enriquecer la respuesta.
Ví dụ: Not really. I don't usually take photos because I rarely carry a camera or use my phone for pictures. So when I need a photo for something important, I ask someone to take it for me. For example, at family gatherings I usually ask a relative to take group shots.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Clarificar vocabulario y corregir errores léxicos y de gramática. Usa un enunciado tópico directo y luego amplía con razones concretas y un ejemplo. Evita palabras incorrectas ('ruler', 'rambler') y repeticiones. Practica conectar ideas con conectores como 'because', 'so', 'although'.
Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I grew up in Montevideo and feel more comfortable in the city. Urban areas offer more cultural activities, cafés and interesting architecture, so I enjoy walking around and exploring them. For example, I like visiting old neighborhoods to see historic buildings and street art.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Mejorar la gramática y la precisión léxica. Evita fragmentos inconclusos y muletillas ('uh'). Responde directamente y da razones específicas sobre por qué prefieres ver lugares en otros países, usando conectores para cohesión. Añade un ejemplo concreto de un país o lugar que te guste.
Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering different cultures and landscapes. Although I appreciate Uruguay's scenery, traveling abroad lets me see new architecture and natural wonders. For instance, I loved the coastal views in Portugal when I visited last year.
× I don't like taking pictures of different views. I don't like taking pictures in general, so I don't carry with me a a camera or I don't use the cell phone to take photos of different moments in fact.
✓ I don't like taking pictures of different views. I don't like taking pictures in general, so I don't carry a camera with me and I don't use my cell phone to take photos of moments, in fact.
The original sentence misorders 'carry with me a camera' and repeats 'a'. Use 'carry a camera with me' or 'carry a camera' and use 'my cell phone' to show possession. Also combine clauses with 'and' instead of repeating 'or' which changed meaning. Suggestion: place possessive before noun ('my cell phone') and follow standard word order 'carry + object + with me'.
× So when I need a photo, I always ask.
✓ So when I need a photo, I always ask someone.
The verb 'ask' usually requires an object; 'ask' whom? Add 'someone' or 'someone to take it' to make the sentence complete. Suggestion: use 'ask someone' or 'ask a friend to take it'.
× I prefer urban views over rural views because I grew up in Montevideo, which is the capital of Uruguay.
✓ I prefer urban views to rural views because I grew up in Montevideo, which is the capital of Uruguay.
When comparing preferences, English commonly uses 'prefer X to Y' rather than 'prefer X over Y'. Use 'prefer ... to ...'. This is a usage convention rather than strict grammar. Suggestion: say 'prefer urban views to rural views'.
× I am and I'm not really familiar with the ruler areas or feel, so I I like to go to the rambler.
✓ I'm not really familiar with the rural areas or their feel, so I like to go to the rambles.
Multiple issues: 'ruler' is a misspelling of 'rural'; 'feel' needs a determiner 'their feel' or better 'the feel of them'; double 'I' is a repetition; 'rambler' is incorrect — likely 'rambles' or 'rambles' (walks). Suggestion: correct spelling to 'rural' and use 'the feel of them' or 'their feel' and replace 'rambler' with 'rambles' or 'the countryside' depending on intended meaning.
× I prefer using another countries, uh, although I like the views of my own country, but I love, uh, traveling around and go to visit, uh, different places and countries.
✓ I prefer visiting other countries, although I like the views of my own country; I love traveling around and visiting different places and countries.
'Using another countries' is ungrammatical: 'another' cannot modify plural 'countries'. Use 'other countries' or 'another country'. Also 'go to visit' should be 'visit' or 'going to visit'; keep verb forms parallel: 'love traveling and visiting'. Suggestion: use 'visiting other countries' and maintain parallel verb structure.
× So, uh, I really enjoy going to. View.
✓ So I really enjoy going to see views.
The fragment 'going to. View.' is incomplete and ungrammatical. Likely intended 'going to see views' or 'going to view places'. Combine into a complete verb phrase: 'going to see views' or 'going to view places'. Suggestion: use a full verb phrase and avoid sentence fragments.