Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it is a bit long-winded and contains some grammar and redundancy issues. To improve, begin with a concise topic sentence, avoid repeated phrases (e.g. "I do love" and "I enjoy"), correct minor grammar ("travelling to the places" → "travelling to places"), and limit to about 3–4 sentences. Add one specific detail to make it more vivid and use a linking word when giving the reason.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, when I visit beaches or mountains I always take photos to capture the light and colors. Because these photos help me remember the atmosphere, I often review them later and choose a few to display at home.

Gợi ý: The main idea is clear, but the response has hesitations, informal fillers ("uh, you know"), some awkward phrases ("original and the raw piece"), and grammatical errors ("greenery trees", "a very good landscapes"). Improve by using a clear topic sentence, avoiding fillers, using correct collocations ("greenery" or "green trees"; "beautiful landscapes"), and adding one specific contrasting detail. Use a linking phrase like "because" or "as" to connect the reason.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views to urban ones because the countryside offers more natural scenery and peace. For instance, you can see rolling hills, dense green fields and small rivers that you rarely find in cities. As a result, I find rural landscapes more relaxing and photogenic.

Gợi ý: Your answer communicates your preference but includes hesitations and some grammar/word-choice problems ("the Kashmir", "filled with landscapes, the waterfall"). Make your topic sentence direct, avoid fillers, give one or two specific examples with correct names and descriptions, and link them to your reason for photographing those views. Keep it to 2–3 sentences for clarity.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I haven't travelled abroad yet and we have many beautiful regions to explore. For example, places like Himachal Pradesh and Kashmir have dramatic mountains, lush valleys and spectacular waterfalls, which I would love to photograph.

× Yes, I do love taking pictures of the views.

✓ Yes, I do love taking pictures of views.

Unnecessary definite article 'the' before plural 'views' is awkward here; remove 'the'. Also sentence contains no -ing error but fits article use (Grammar Problem Type 8 selected per instruction to only correct types in list). Suggest using 'taking pictures of views' or 'taking photos of scenery' for naturalness.

× In fact, wherever I go for travelling to the places such as mountains or beaches, I usually spend most of the time in taking pictures because I enjoy the view and I could reminisce the memories later when I come back from.

✓ In fact, wherever I travel, to places such as mountains or beaches, I usually spend most of my time taking pictures because I enjoy the view and I can reminisce about the memories later when I come back.

Incorrect use of 'for travelling' (use base verb 'travel' after 'wherever I') and unnecessary 'to the places' article. 'Spend most of the time in taking pictures' should be 'spend most of my time taking pictures' (verb + -ing after 'spend time'). 'Could' replaced with 'can' to match present ability. Add preposition 'about' after 'reminisce'. This addresses Grammar Problem Type 8 (verb + -ing) and 11 (preposition) where relevant.

× Well, I prefer views of rural areas more than urban areas because in rural areas we could see the original and, uh, the raw piece that we cannot find in urban areas, there's much more greenery trees, uh, you know, you could see a very good landscapes over there.

✓ Well, I prefer rural views to urban ones because in rural areas we can see original, natural scenes that we cannot find in cities; there are many more green trees and you can see very good landscapes there.

Use 'prefer X to Y' rather than 'prefer X more than Y' (Grammar Problem Type 11/26). 'We could' changed to 'we can' for present ability (modal usage). 'The raw piece' is incorrect noun phrase—use 'original, natural scenes'. 'Greenery trees' is wrong order; 'green trees' or 'lots of greenery' is correct (adjective order issue). 'A very good landscapes' mixes singular article with plural noun; correct to 'very good landscapes' or 'a very good landscape'. This addresses preposition and structure errors (Types 11 and 26) and verb + -ing indirectly.

× Well, to be very specific, I haven't travelled other countries, but yeah, uh, we have lots of places in our country that are much more beautiful, such as Himachal, the Kashmir, which is filled with landscapes, the waterfall. So I would love to take pictures over there.

✓ Well, to be very specific, I haven't traveled to other countries, but we have many beautiful places in our country, such as Himachal and Kashmir, which have great landscapes and waterfalls. So I would love to take pictures there.

'Travelled other countries' is incorrect; use 'traveled to other countries' (preposition). 'The Kashmir' is unnecessary article; use 'Kashmir'. 'Which is filled with landscapes, the waterfall' is ungrammatical—use plural verbs 'have' and plural nouns 'landscapes and waterfalls'. 'Over there' can be simplified to 'there'. This correction involves modal/tense and preposition fixes (Types 4 and 11) and sentence structure (Type 26).