Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is natural and relevant, with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. To improve, avoid minor repetition ("I like" twice) and vary vocabulary; add a brief specific example or emotion to make it more vivid. Also keep to under five sentences by combining similar ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I'm an amateur photographer who always brings a camera when I travel to capture different landscapes. I particularly enjoy mountains and rivers because the natural light enhances textures and creates a peaceful atmosphere, for example, I once photographed sunrise over a mountain ridge and the warm light transformed the scene.

Gợi ý: Good direct answer and relevant details, but watch for minor grammar errors and repetition ("the atmosphere it creates" repeats earlier phrasing). Be more specific (name an animal or describe a typical scene) and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because the natural light and open spaces feel more tranquil, so I can focus on composition and textures. For instance, I often photograph meadows at dawn, trying to capture deer grazing in soft morning mist.

Gợi ý: The main idea is clear, but there are vocabulary and fluency issues: "prefer using other countries" is incorrect and hesitation ("umm") weakens your response. Replace awkward phrasing with "prefer views in other countries," and give one concise, specific example of a site or country and why it appeals to your photography.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I'm familiar with my home scenery and want fresh subjects like historic architecture or dramatic coastlines. For example, I enjoyed photographing the colorful fishing villages along the Amalfi Coast, where the light and sea create striking contrasts.

× I especially like mountains and rivers because I like natural light and the atmosphere they create.

✓ I especially like mountains and rivers because I like the natural light and the atmosphere they create.

The sentence omits the definite article 'the' before 'natural light' which makes the noun phrase sound general rather than referring to specific light associated with landscapes. Add 'the' to specify the light that creates the atmosphere in those scenes. Suggestion: Use 'the natural light' when referring to the particular light you mean.

× I prefer views in rural areas because I enjoy the natural light and the atmosphere it creates.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I enjoy the natural light and the atmosphere they create.

The plural subject 'views' (and the previously mentioned 'rural areas') requires the plural pronoun 'they' to refer back. Using 'it' incorrectly refers to a singular noun. Use 'they' to match plural antecedents. Suggestion: Make pronouns agree in number with their antecedents.

× I especially love scenic features like rivers, mountains and meadows, and I like photographing the wild animal there.

✓ I especially love scenic features like rivers, mountains and meadows, and I like photographing the wild animals there.

The phrase 'the wild animal' uses singular 'animal' but the context (rivers, mountains, meadows) implies multiple animals or wildlife in general, so the plural 'animals' is appropriate. Use plural nouns when referring to wildlife collectively. Suggestion: Use 'wildlife' or plural 'wild animals' to refer to animals in general.

× I prefer using other countries because I'm very familiar with the scenery at home and I want to see something different, such as historical views and coastal sceneries.

✓ I prefer traveling to other countries because I'm very familiar with the scenery at home and I want to see something different, such as historical sites and coastal scenery.

The original 'prefer using other countries' is unidiomatic; 'prefer traveling to other countries' correctly expresses the idea. 'Coastal sceneries' is incorrect pluralization; 'coastal scenery' (uncountable) or 'coastal landscapes' is better. 'Historical views' is awkward; 'historical sites' is the natural expression in this context. Suggestion: Use 'traveling to other countries', 'historical sites', and 'coastal scenery' or 'coastal landscapes'.

× For example, I love traveling abroad and taking photos of the local umm, historic sites.

✓ For example, I love traveling abroad and taking photos of the local historic sites.

The original contains hesitation 'umm' which is fine in speech but should be omitted in written correction. The rest is fine; 'local historic sites' correctly uses plural 'sites' to match 'photos of'. Suggestion: Remove filler words like 'umm' in formal or written responses.