Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using a clear topic sentence, correct plural/singular forms, and adding one or two specific details. Keep it under five sentences and use a linking word if you expand. For example, say why you like it and give a brief example.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy taking pictures of different views. For instance, I like photographing city skylines at sunset because the light makes the buildings look dramatic and colourful.

Gợi ý: The response is not relevant to the question. Answer directly with a topic sentence stating your preference (urban or rural), then provide one or two specific reasons or examples using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Keep it natural and concise.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I enjoy the peaceful landscapes and natural colours, and I can capture wide open spaces that create a strong sense of depth in photos.

Gợi ý: Correct grammar and clarity: start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, use correct verb forms and nouns, and remove filler words. Then give a specific reason and a short example. Use linking words like 'however' or 'because' to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I prefer taking pictures in other countries because foreign scenes feel more novel and interesting. For example, when I photographed a market in Morocco, the colours and textures were unlike anything I see at home, so the photos felt unique.

× Yes, I really like taking picture of different views.

✓ Yes, I really like taking pictures of different views.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because 'different views' implies more than one item; English requires plural form for countable nouns when referring to multiple instances. Suggestion: when talking about photographing multiple scenes, use 'pictures' or 'photos'.

× Aurora, Eloise.

✓ I prefer both: Aurora and Eloise.

The original reply 'Aurora, Eloise.' is unclear and lacks a subject or verb; it's a fragment. This is a pronoun/reference/response clarity issue. The student should respond in a complete sentence indicating preference. Suggestion: use a full clause like 'I prefer both Aurora and Eloise' or 'I prefer Aurora and Eloise.'

× I very like taking picture of a view, uh, in my country, but uh, taking picture of youth in other country is very special for me because I really like travel to other country. So I think I prefer taking.

✓ I really like taking pictures of views in my country, but taking pictures of places in other countries is very special to me because I really like traveling to other countries. So I think I prefer taking pictures abroad.

Multiple errors apply but must match listed types: 'very like' is incorrect adverb placement and verb choice (should be 'really like') — classified here as Incorrect use of quantifiers/adverb placement and verb forms. 'taking picture' should be 'taking pictures' (plural). 'a view' should be 'views' for general preference. 'youth' is wrong word choice — likely meant 'sites' or 'places'; corrected to 'places'. 'in other country' needs plural 'countries' and preposition/ article adjustments. 'travel to other country' requires gerund 'traveling' and plural 'countries'. Final fragment 'So I think I prefer taking.' is incomplete; completed as 'I prefer taking pictures abroad.' Suggestions: use 'really like' instead of 'very like', pluralize countable nouns when generalizing, use gerunds after 'like' or 'enjoy' (traveling), choose accurate nouns (places/sites), and finish sentences with a clear object.