Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more grammatical, concise and use precise vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), correct subject-verb and noun forms, and give one specific supporting detail with a linking phrase. Keep to 2–3 sentences and use words like scenery, landscapes, wildlife.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, when I go hiking I often photograph mountain landscapes and local wildlife because they capture the atmosphere of the place and are hard to find in the city.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (singular/plural, tense), remove repetition and use linking words to explain reasons. Provide one specific contrast between urban and rural views and a brief example (e.g. fields, forests, coast).

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because city skylines often look similar, whereas the countryside offers varied scenery. For instance, I enjoy the open grasslands and dense forests that change with the seasons.

Gợi ý: Be specific and accurate with place names and grammar. Start with a clear opinion, then give one or two specific examples of notable places and explain why they are special. Avoid fillers and unclear place names—use correct nouns and short descriptions.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because Taiwan has many beautiful landscapes. For example, Yangmingshan National Park has unique volcanic scenery and hot springs, and Taroko Gorge offers dramatic marble cliffs and river views that I recommend visiting.

× Personally, I'd like to take a picture for different views, uh, because most of you is really incredible and astonished.

✓ Personally, I'd like to take pictures of different views because most of them are really incredible and astonishing.

Pronoun and noun number: 'you' is incorrect here; the speaker means 'views' (things), so use 'them'. Also use plural 'pictures' and 'views' to match meaning. 'Is' must change to 'are' to agree with plural subject. 'Astonished' describes a person; use 'astonishing' to describe views. Suggestion: identify the noun being referred to and match pronoun and verb number accordingly. Grammar problem type ID:12

× For example, I really into go hiking, so I often take the photos of the welcoming or, uh, the wildlife animal.

✓ For example, I'm really into going hiking, so I often take photos of the scenery or wildlife animals.

After 'be into' use gerund form 'going', not base verb. 'The photos' can be simplified to 'photos'; 'welcoming' is wrong for scenery — use 'scenery'. 'Wildlife animal' should be plural 'wildlife animals' or simply 'wildlife'. Also use 'I'm' contraction for present state. Suggestion: use correct verb patterns (be + into + -ing) and choose correct nouns and plurality. Grammar problem type ID:8

× It's really great.

✓ It's really great.

This sentence is grammatically correct but short and vague. To improve clarity, specify what 'it' refers to: for example, 'Taking photos while hiking is really great.' This makes the subject explicit and fits present tense description. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Personally I prefer rural area because uh the view in city like the skyscrapers I think is similar in many cities.

✓ Personally, I prefer rural areas because views in cities, like skyscrapers, are similar in many places.

Use plural 'rural areas' and 'views' for general statements. 'The view in city' is ungrammatical — use 'views in cities'. 'Is' should be 'are' to match plural 'views'. Also 'many places' is clearer than 'many cities' repetition. Suggestion: use plural forms when making generalizations. Grammar problem type ID:14

× So it didn't capture my it didn't catch my eyes.

✓ So they don't catch my eye.

'It didn't capture my it didn't catch my eyes' is ungrammatical and repetitive. Use plural subject 'they' for 'views', present tense 'don't catch' because speaker is stating a general preference, and singular idiom 'catch my eye' (not 'eyes'). Suggestion: choose correct subject and use the fixed idiom. Grammar problem type ID:27

× And the rural place has the special place like the grass forest.

✓ And rural places have special features like grassy forests.

Awkward repetition 'place has the special place'. Use 'rural places have special features' to convey meaning. 'Grass forest' is wrong; use adjective 'grassy' with 'forests' plural. Also match plural forms. Suggestion: avoid repeating 'place' and use appropriate adjective forms. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I will say that Taiwan have many astonish views, so I will recommend that uh, everyone to visit here like uh, the Yao Ming song, we have the balcony Fuch is really unique and you can also see the uh Taiwan special.

✓ I would say that Taiwan has many astonishing views, so I would recommend everyone visit here. For example, Yangmingshan has unique terraces and you can also see many things special to Taiwan.

Subject-verb agreement: 'Taiwan have' should be 'Taiwan has' (singular subject). 'Astonish' is wrong form; use adjective 'astonishing'. Use 'recommend everyone visit' or 'recommend that everyone visit' (avoid extra 'to'). 'Yao Ming song' seems to be 'Yangmingshan' (proper noun); 'balcony Fuch' is unclear — replaced with 'terraces' as likely intent. Also avoid filler 'uh'. Suggestion: ensure singular subjects take singular verbs, use correct adjective forms, and simplify recommendation structure. Grammar problem type ID:27