Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
I enjoy taking pictures of different videos because I like capturing the colors and utmost hair above the place. For example, when I travel or I often photograph landscape and stickers to remember the tree.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I prefer youth in rural areas before they are better at nature. For example, I enjoy learning fires and fresh air. We have my relights after our BBV in the city.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer videos in other countries Yeah, I like my country to, but the world is very large. I want to see the beautiful views, uh, world.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 28.0Gợi ý: 句子不够清晰、词汇使用错误且有大量发音或拼写混淆。回答应直接回应问题并用1-2句支持细节,避免冗余。建议:1) 使用正确词汇(views, scenery, landscapes)。2) 开头给出明确主题句,如“I like taking pictures of different views because…” 3) 用一到两个具体细节支持,例如拍摄颜色、光线或特定景物。4) 控制长度不超过5句,注意语法和连词(for example, when I travel, I often...)。
Ví dụ: I like taking pictures of different views because they help me remember special moments. For example, when I travel I often photograph landscapes and colorful sunsets to capture the light and atmosphere.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 22.0Gợi ý: 表达混乱且大量词不达意,缺乏连贯性与具体细节。建议:1) 直接陈述偏好(urban or rural)。2) 使用明确原因支持(e.g., peace, fresh air, nature)。3) 使用连接词连接原因和例子(because, for example)。4) 避免无意义词汇,保持句子简短且语法正确。
Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I enjoy the peace and fresh air there. For example, I like photographing fields and trees when I visit the countryside because it feels calm and natural.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答含糊、有重复且有口语填充词(uh, yeah)。建议:1) 直接给出偏好并说明原因。2) 用一两个具体理由或例子支持(e.g., different cultures, unique landscapes)。3) 避免重复和填充词,保持句子简洁。4) 使用连接词如“because”或“however”提升连贯性。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because each place offers different landscapes and cultures to explore. For example, I want to photograph historic European cities and tropical beaches to see new scenery and learn about local life.
× I enjoy taking pictures of different videos because I like capturing the colors and utmost hair above the place.
✓ I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I like capturing the colors and the atmosphere of a place.
原句中使用了错误的名词“videos”(应为“views”)和词组“utmost hair above the place”(无意义且不符合语境)。这是词汇选择问题,属于形容词/副词或词语使用不当。建议:确认语境后选择合适名词(views 表示风景),用“the atmosphere of a place”表达“地方的氛围”更自然。避免直译或拼写错误。
× For example, when I travel or I often photograph landscape and stickers to remember the tree.
✓ For example, when I travel I often photograph landscapes and scenes to remember them.
句子结构混乱:使用了不连贯的并列("when I travel or I often"),并且“stickers”和“tree”与语境不符。这属于句子结构错误。建议:去掉多余连词,保持主句一致;将名词复数化并替换为合适词汇(landscapes, scenes),并用代词指代前文对象(them)。
× I prefer youth in rural areas before they are better at nature.
✓ I prefer rural areas because they are closer to nature.
原句中“prefer youth in rural areas before”中的介词和连词使用不当且单词选择错误(youth 与语境不符)。这是介词/连接词及词汇使用问题。建议:用 because 引出原因,使用“closer to nature”表达“更接近自然”。
× For example, I enjoy learning fires and fresh air.
✓ For example, I enjoy the fresh air.
原句“learning fires”不合语法且意义不明,属于词语使用不当(形容词/名词混用)。建议:删去无意义部分,直接说“I enjoy the fresh air”更自然。
× We have my relights after our BBV in the city.
✓ We have fewer lights after we leave the city.
原句“my relights after our BBV”为拼写/词序混乱,无法理解,属于句子结构错误。根据语境,意图可能是“离开城市后灯光更少”。建议用“fewer lights after we leave the city”清楚表达该意思。
× I prefer videos in other countries Yeah, I like my country to, but the world is very large.
✓ I prefer views in other countries. Yeah, I like my country too, but the world is very large.
原句中“videos”应该是“views”,并且“to”拼写错误应为“too”。这是词汇和副词(too)使用错误。建议:检查常见拼写错误,使用“views”和“too”来正确表达喜好和也的意思。
× I want to see the beautiful views, uh, world.
✓ I want to see the beautiful views around the world.
原句“uh, world”停顿与词序不当,使句子不完整,属于句子结构问题。建议将短语合并为“around the world”表示“世界各地”,使句子完整流畅。