Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce filler words and make the answer more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with an example. Use linking words (for example, because, so) to connect ideas and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Taking photos helps me preserve memories and relive moments later. For example, when I visited the coast last year, I took several landscape shots so I could remember the light and colors of that evening.

Gợi ý: Tighten the response by stating a clear preference and giving one specific reason with an example. Avoid repeating similar words (e.g., "more dynamic" and "more colorful") and aim for a natural flow with a linking phrase such as "because" or "for example."

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because they are more vibrant and varied. For instance, city streets with colorful murals and lively markets lift my mood and make walks more enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Provide a clearer stance or present a balanced answer using a short topic sentence followed by two specific reasons (one for home country, one for abroad) and a final brief conclusion. Reduce repetition and use linking words like "however" or "on the other hand."

Ví dụ: It's hard to choose, but I enjoy both. At home I appreciate familiar cultural details and local landscapes, while abroad I like discovering new architecture and traditions. Therefore, I try to travel whenever possible to experience both types of views.

× I think it is a great way to, uh, keep the memory to yourself and, uh, it gives an opportunity to come back to this, uh, photograph a bit later and to remember what you have seen.

✓ I think it is a great way to keep memories to yourself, and it gives you the opportunity to come back to a photograph later and remember what you have seen.

Original errors: 'keep the memory to yourself' uses unidiomatic singular 'memory' and incorrect preposition usage; should be plural 'memories' and no 'to' after 'keep' in this context (Grammar problem type IDs: 1 Singular and plural issue; 11 Incorrect use of prepositions). Also 'it gives an opportunity' is unnatural without a personal object and 'to come back to this photograph a bit later and to remember' is wordy; better: 'it gives you the opportunity to come back to a photograph later and remember...' Suggestions: use plural 'memories', remove incorrect preposition 'to' after 'keep', include pronoun 'you' after 'gives', simplify infinitive phrases by removing redundant 'to'.

× I think I prefer views in urban areas more because they are more dynamic and more colorful and I really enjoy vivid colors because it improves my mood and just my overall well-being.

✓ I think I prefer urban views because they are more dynamic and colorful, and I really enjoy vivid colors because they improve my mood and my overall well-being.

Original errors: redundant phrasing 'views in urban areas more' — use 'prefer urban views' or 'prefer views in urban areas' (Grammar problem type ID: 26 Sentence structure errors). 'It improves my mood' disagrees with plural subject 'vivid colors' so verb should be 'improve' (Grammar problem type ID: 27 Subject-verb agreement errors). Also 'just my overall well-being' is awkward; better 'my overall well-being'. Suggestions: simplify noun phrase order, ensure verb agrees with plural subject, and remove unnecessary words.

× I can't really choose because all countries are different and they have different gorgeous and amusing places and they are all unique.

✓ I can't really choose because all countries are different and each has gorgeous and interesting places; they are all unique.

Original errors: adjective order and word choice 'different gorgeous and amusing places' is awkward and repetitive (Grammar problem type ID: 18 Incorrect order of adjectives; 13 Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). Also 'they have different' is repetitive with 'are different.' Suggestions: use 'each has' to avoid repetition, choose natural adjective collocations like 'gorgeous and interesting' and simplify sentence structure.