Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Говорите более связно и избегайте заполнителей («uh», «and uh»). Начните с ясного топик‑предложения, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретные причины или пример. Следите за грамматикой (например, cannot stop / I couldn't stop) и временем. Ограничьте ответ до 3–4 предложений, используйте связки: because, so, for example.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me notice details I would otherwise miss. For example, I often photograph sunsets and cityscapes to capture changing light and color. I find photography relaxing, so I do it whenever I have free time.

Gợi ý: Сформулируйте ответ чётко, избегайте повторов и преувеличений («I can't breathe»). Дайте 1–2 конкретных объяснения и используйте связки (because, for example, so). Проверьте порядок слов: 'I like photographing buildings' вместо 'doing picture taking the pictures'.

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I enjoy photographing striking architecture and geometric lines. For example, modern skyscrapers and historic facades provide interesting contrasts and details. So I often explore city centers to find unique angles for my shots.

Gợi ý: Дайте связный ответ с корректной грамматикой и завершёнными предложениями. Объясните причину и приведите конкретный пример (например, тип архитектуры). Избегайте неполных фраз и посторонних слов. Используйте связки: because, for example, therefore.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they often have diverse historical architecture that I haven't seen at home. For example, I admired the ornate cathedrals and old town squares when I visited Europe. Therefore, I try to travel to photograph different styles and cultural details.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because uh when I started uh taking pictures, I uh offer beautiful views.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because when I started taking pictures, I found beautiful views.

The original sentence has unclear and incorrect verb use ('offer') and disfluent filler words. Replace 'offer' with 'found' to convey discovery. Remove filler 'uh' for clarity and make verbs consistent: 'started taking' + 'found'. Suggestion: Practice forming logical clauses: 'when I started doing X, I Y'. Use clear verbs that match the intended meaning.

× I can't stopped because it dragged me down and uh, I so much like it and uh and uh.

✓ I couldn't stop because it drew me in, and I liked it very much.

Incorrect use of modal + past verb ('can't stopped') and wrong verb 'dragged me down' (negative meaning). Use past modal 'couldn't stop' and simple past 'drew me in' to express attraction. Replace 'so much like it' with 'liked it very much' for grammatical adjective/adverb order. Suggestion: Use correct modal+base verb ('couldn't stop') and choose verbs that reflect intended meaning.

× I prefer views in urban areas because I I like powerful architecture and when I see this building I I can't breathe and it's so breathtaking and I like doing picture taking the pictures.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because I like striking architecture, and when I see such buildings I am breathless; they are so breathtaking, and I enjoy taking pictures of them.

Problems: repeated words ('I I'), incorrect phrase 'can't breathe' (use 'am breathless' for natural expression), awkward 'doing picture taking the pictures'. Correct to 'enjoy taking pictures of them'. Maintain present simple for preferences and general truths. Suggestion: Remove repeated words, use natural adjectives ('striking'), and standard gerund phrase 'enjoy taking pictures of'.

× I prefer views in other countries because in my country's more rural areas and when I visited other countries, I admire the historical architecture because it's breathtaking and.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because my country has more rural areas, and when I visit other countries I admire the historical architecture because it is breathtaking.

Mix of tenses ('visited' past with 'admire' present) and incorrect possessive form 'my country's' used as noun phrase. Use present simple for habitual actions: 'my country has', 'when I visit', 'I admire'. Also remove trailing 'and.' Suggestion: Keep tense consistent for general preferences (present simple) and use full noun phrase ('my country has more rural areas').

× Ended school.

✓ I finished school.

Fragment lacking a subject and proper verb form. 'Ended school' is not natural English; use 'I finished school' or 'I completed school' to indicate completion. Suggestion: Always include a subject and a correctly inflected verb: 'I finished...'.