Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more precise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid irrelevant words (e.g. "different foods" if you mean views), and limit to 3–4 coherent sentences. Use linking words to connect reasons and an example (e.g. "because", "so", "for example"). Also correct verb forms and word choices (e.g. "I enjoy", "record my emotions").

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because each place has a unique atmosphere that I want to remember. For example, when I travel I often take out my camera to record the scenery and my feelings, so I can look back on the experience later.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence saying you like both, then explain with clear specific contrasts and one brief example. Use linking words like "because", "while", "for example" and correct phrases (e.g. "skyscrapers", "open fields"). Avoid filler phrases such as "you know".

Ví dụ: I prefer both urban and rural views because each offers different charms. Urban areas have dramatic skyscrapers and lively streets, while rural areas offer peaceful open fields and natural scenery. For example, I love city skylines at night but also enjoy quiet walks in the countryside.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and avoid hesitations. State you like both and give specific reasons why (familiarity, cultural differences, unique landscapes). Use clearer vocabulary (e.g. "diversity", "scenery", "unique features") and a linking word to connect ideas. Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences.

Ví dụ: I like views in both my own country and other countries because each offers different experiences. My country's scenery feels familiar and comforting, while overseas places show new landscapes and cultures that are exciting to photograph.

× I love it 'cause I'm so enjoying about different foods, 'cause when I get into a totally different environment, I'll just take my camera out or my phone to take some pictures and just recording my emotion, my feelings. Yeah.

✓ I love it because I enjoy different foods so much; when I enter a totally different environment, I just take my camera or my phone to take pictures and record my emotions and feelings.

Errors: incorrect continuous form 'I'm so enjoying' and gerund 'just recording' are used where simple present or base verb forms are required. Use 'I enjoy' (simple present) to express a general preference and 'record' (base verb) after 'to' or in a simple present sequence. Also replace informal 'cause' with 'because' and remove redundant words. Suggestion: use simple present for habits and preferences and use base verb forms for actions in a sequence. Grammar problem type ID:8

× I mean both cause different environments hold different charms, whether the high like buildings or wide felt you know it's all keep different feelings and.

✓ I mean both, because different environments have different charms; whether it is tall buildings or wide fields, they evoke different feelings.

Errors: tense and word choice issues—'hold' is acceptable but 'have' is more natural; 'the high like buildings' and 'wide felt' are incorrect word choices and forms. 'It's all keep different feelings' mixes tenses and uses incorrect verbs. Use simple present 'have' and 'evoke' to describe general truths. Also correct 'felt' to 'fields' and structure the sentence with clearer clauses. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I mean both too, 'cause it's maybe because I have a, uh, diversity. I, I like my country's scenery and other country cause different place holds different beautiful seams, yeah.

✓ I mean both too, maybe because I appreciate diversity. I like my country's scenery and scenery in other countries because different places have different kinds of beauty.

Errors: awkward phrasing and incorrect nouns—'I have a diversity' is ungrammatical; use 'I appreciate diversity'. 'Other country' needs plural 'other countries', and 'different place holds different beautiful seams' contains wrong nouns ('seams') and singular/plural mismatches. Use simple present 'have' for general statements and correct noun forms. Also remove filler words for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:6