Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Keep your answer concise and correct minor grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., "nice" repeated) and incorrect prepositions (use "in nature" not "within in nature").

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, I like capturing coastal sunsets and forest paths because the light and colours are very atmospheric, so my photos feel calm and evocative.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer and avoid fillers and unclear words. Use linking words to explain reasons and provide specific details. Correct vocabulary: say "rural areas" and "natural scenery" or "green surroundings". Keep it within 3–4 sentences and remove hesitation sounds like "umm".

Ví dụ: I definitely prefer views in rural areas because I enjoy natural scenery. For instance, green fields and forests are more peaceful than city skylines, so I find them better for relaxing and taking interesting photos.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and finish your thought with a specific reason or example. Use plural forms and complete sentences (e.g., "views in other countries" and "unique culture"). Add linking words like "because" or "for example" and give one concrete example of what makes foreign views appealing.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they let me experience different cultures and lifestyles. For example, walking through traditional markets in Japan or Spain gives me unique photo opportunities and insights into local life.

× I always love to be within in nature, environments, area.

✓ I always love to be in nature, the environment, or the area.

The phrase 'within in' is redundant; use 'in' alone. 'Environments' and 'area' need articles or clearer coordination; 'the environment' or 'the area' is more natural. Also use parallel nouns joined by 'or' for clarity. Suggestion: choose one noun phrase (e.g., 'in nature' or 'in the countryside').

× Definitely, I prefer a view in the rural areas umm due to the. Apprentice natural view of the nature and green surrounding around me so I would always prefer.

✓ Definitely, I prefer views in rural areas because of the natural scenery and green surroundings, so I would always prefer them.

Incorrect singular/plural forms: 'a view in the rural areas' mixes singular 'a view' with plural 'areas'—use 'views in rural areas' or 'a view in a rural area'. 'Surrounding' should be plural 'surroundings'. Also 'Apprentice' is wrong word; omitted and replaced with 'natural scenery'. Suggestion: ensure nouns match in number and use plural where referring to general instances ('views', 'surroundings').

× Definitely, I prefer a view in the rural areas umm due to the. Apprentice natural view of the nature and green surrounding around me so I would always prefer.

✓ Definitely, I prefer views in rural areas because of the natural scenery and the green surroundings around me, so I would always choose them.

Redundant or incorrect prepositions: 'due to the' was incomplete; use 'because of' for reasons. 'Of the nature' is unnatural; say 'natural scenery' or 'nature'. 'Surrounding around me' repeats meaning—use 'surroundings' or 'around me' but not both together. Suggestion: use 'because of' for explaining reasons and avoid repeating prepositions.

× So I prefer view in other countries than my own country because this gives you the opportunity to connect with the culture and also the life of these people because every country has a unique.

✓ So I prefer views in other countries to those in my own country because they give you the opportunity to connect with the culture and the lives of the people, as every country is unique.

'Prefer view' should be 'prefer views' (plural) or 'a view' with 'in another country'. Use comparative structure 'prefer X to Y' not 'prefer X than Y'. 'Life' should be plural 'lives' when referring to people generally. Sentence ended with 'unique' needing a noun; complete as 'unique' (adjective) with 'is unique' or 'has unique culture'. Suggestion: use correct comparative structure 'prefer A to B', match singular/plural, and complete descriptive adjectives.