Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 简洁表达观点并减少犹豫语：回答时先直接给出主题句，然后用一到两句具体说明原因或举例，避免重复和填充词（如 uh, umm, like）。注意语法正确性和句子连贯性，例如把“take pictures can record the memories”改为“taking pictures records memories”。练习把句子控制在最多五句内。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos because they help me capture memorable scenes and recall special moments later. For example, I often photograph city skylines and mountain views so I can revisit those memories when I’m busy.

Gợi ý: 回答要明确且逻辑清晰：首先明确偏好（urban或rural），然后给出两到三个具体理由并使用连接词（because, while, however）。避免自相矛盾的表达（你同时说更喜欢urban又更喜欢natural sceneries）。改正常见语法错误，如“that's depend”应为“that depends”。控制语句长度，避免重复。

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they offer natural landscapes and a peaceful atmosphere. For instance, countryside fields and forests are quieter and less crowded, which helps me relax and enjoy nature.

Gợi ý: 明确表达并提供对比细节：先给出立场（both/depends），接着分别说明本国和外国风景的不同点并用连接词（for example, whereas）。减少重复词汇和填充词，注意时态和词语搭配（sense of belonging, cultural attractions）。保持回答不超过五句。

Ví dụ: It depends; I appreciate both. In my country I feel a strong sense of belonging and familiarity with the landscape. In other countries I enjoy discovering new scenery and cultural attractions, which makes traveling exciting.

× Yes, absolutely, because I think uh take pic pictures can record the memories and in like in like different uh buildings or uh stunning uh stunning sceneries umm in the future when you see when you have the time to see these pictures and it was really memorable.

✓ Yes, absolutely, because I think taking pictures can record memories of different buildings or stunning scenery. In the future, when you have time to look at these pictures, they will be really memorable.

句中原文使用了不带 -ing 的动词短语“take pic pictures”，在英语中表示“拍照”作主语或宾语时应使用动名词形式（taking）。此外“sceneries”通常用不可数名词“scenery”，并且句子时态需一致（将来回看时用将来时）。建议将“take pictures”改为“taking pictures”，并把复数可数名替换为不可数形式，调整时态保持一致。

× And that's depend, but I prefer the views in the urban areas because umm, compared to the urban area I more like and I'm I'm more prefer the the natural sceneries instead of the junk concrete jungle.

✓ That depends, but I prefer views in urban areas. Compared to cities, I prefer natural scenery rather than the concrete jungle.

原句中“that's depend”缺乏主语动词一致，正确搭配为“That depends”。“the urban areas / the urban area”使用不一致且多余定冠词。短语“I more like and I'm I'm more prefer”结构混乱，重复且用词错误，应使用单一表达“prefer”。“sceneries”应为不可数“scenery”。建议简化句子，去掉多余冠词与重复词，使用正确动词“depends”和“prefer”。

× And in the in the rural you can get away the hustles and bustles.

✓ In the countryside you can get away from the hustle and bustle.

原句“get away the hustles and bustles”缺少介词“from”，短语应为“get away from”。同时“rural”是形容词，不可单独当名词使用，正确名词为“the countryside”或“rural areas”。“hustles and bustles”常用固定短语“the hustle and bustle”。建议使用“get away from the hustle and bustle”。

× I think that depends. I think both of them are really stunning. And so, umm, for my country, I just feel, feel a sense of belonging and I think that is a family and, and uh, in other countries there are, there are always a lot of beautiful sceneries and different cultural, different sceneries. That was special.

✓ I think it depends. Both are really stunning. For my country, I feel a sense of belonging and family. In other countries there are always many beautiful sights and different cultures. Those are special.

原句中代词使用不准确：“I think that depends”更自然为“I think it depends”。“both of them”可简化为“both”。“I think that is a family”语义不清且代词指代错误，应该说“I feel a sense of belonging and family”。“sceneries”应改为可数短语如“sights”或不可数“scenery”，“different cultural, different sceneries”重复且结构错误，改为“different cultures”。最后“That was special”时态与指代不明，改为“These/Those are special”更恰当。建议注意代词指代一致与名词可数性。