Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I dislike taking pictures uh because I think it need a lot of technical skills. If you would like to take a professional picture some of time. I prefer to copy my husband's picture from the alarm. It's maybe more easy for me to take.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I prefer the rural areas because when I was a child I was born in village and there was a vast grassland and blue skies. I enjoy the environment and surroundings very much. It helped me have a good imagination.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
Well, I prefer to visit in other countries because I have traveled to a lot of place in China, but I haven't been foreigner countries to visit the buildings or know about the local culture.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、连贯并直接回应问题。避免犹豫词(如 uh),纠正语法错误(如 need → needs),合并短句以减少断裂。可以给出一个简短理由并举例,同时控制在最多五个句子内。使用连词(because, so, therefore)使逻辑更清晰。
Ví dụ: To be honest, I don't enjoy taking pictures because it requires a lot of technical skill, which I don't have. Instead, I usually use my husband's photos as a reference because it's easier and saves time. Occasionally I try simple shots with my phone, but I prefer to leave serious photography to him.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 总体表达清楚,但注意语法和用词(例如 born in a village, vast grasslands)。可以用更具体的细节和连词丰富答案,如比较城市与乡村的不同感受,并控制句数。适当加入例子或回忆使回答更有说服力。
Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because I grew up in a small village surrounded by vast grasslands and clear blue skies, which I still find very relaxing. Compared with noisy cities, the countryside feels peaceful and helps me think more creatively, so I often visit rural parks when I need a break.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要更准确、地道(例如 visit other countries; foreign countries)。避免语法错误(a lot of places; haven't visited foreign countries)并给出具体原因或例子,使用连接词(because, so)解释偏好。维持简洁,不超过五句。
Ví dụ: I prefer to see views in other countries because although I've traveled to many places in China, I haven't visited foreign countries to explore their architecture and local cultures. For example, I would love to see European old towns and learn about different traditions, which I think would be very inspiring.
× To be honest, I dislike taking pictures uh because I think it need a lot of technical skills.
✓ To be honest, I dislike taking pictures because I think it needs a lot of technical skills.
句子中主语是单数第三人称形式的形式主语 it,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式 needs;同时删除口语填充词“uh”。建议:注意主语与动词的一致,第三人称单数加 -s。
× If you would like to take a professional picture some of time.
✓ If you would like to take a professional picture sometimes.
原句结构不完整,且搭配错误。“some of time”应为副词 sometimes 表示有时。建议:使用完整的副词或短语来表达频率。
× I prefer to copy my husband's picture from the alarm.
✓ I prefer to copy my husband's pictures from the album.
原句中 'alarm' 用错,应该是 'album'(相册);此外上下文指多张照片应用复数 pictures。建议:注意单词拼写并根据语境使用单复数。
× It's maybe more easy for me to take.
✓ It's maybe easier for me to take them.
比较级用法错误,应使用 easier(不是 more easy);另外补充宾语 them 使句子完整。建议:单词 'easy' 的比较级为 'easier'。
× I prefer the rural areas because when I was a child I was born in village and there was a vast grassland and blue skies.
✓ I prefer rural areas because when I was a child I was born in a village and there were vast grasslands and blue skies.
① 'in village' 缺少不定冠词 a,应为 'in a village';② 'there was a vast grassland' 与语境复数更自然,且与 'skies' 一致,使用 were 和复数 'grasslands';③ 去掉定冠词 the 与 general preference 搭配。建议:注意冠词用法和单复数一致。
× I enjoy the environment and surroundings very much. It helped me have a good imagination.
✓ I enjoy the environment and surroundings very much. They helped me develop a good imagination.
代词指代不明,原句 It 指代不清,应使用复数代词 they 指代前面的 environment and surroundings;动词搭配更自然为 develop a good imagination。建议:确保代词与先行词在人称和数上一致,使用更自然的动词短语。
× Well, I prefer to visit in other countries because I have traveled to a lot of place in China, but I haven't been foreigner countries to visit the buildings or know about the local culture.
✓ Well, I prefer to visit other countries because I have traveled to a lot of places in China, but I haven't been to foreign countries to visit the buildings or learn about the local culture.
① 'visit in other countries' 中不需要介词 in,应为 visit other countries;② 'a lot of place' 中 place 应为复数 places;③ 'haven't been foreigner countries' 语序和词形错误,应为 'haven't been to foreign countries';④ 'know about' 用法不自然,改为 learn about 更恰当。建议:注意动词与介词搭配、名词单复数以及固定搭配。