Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, conciseness and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct plural/singular and article errors (e.g., 'taking pictures', 'a picture', 'the page' unclear), and avoid redundant phrases. Use one or two linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples (where/when you photograph sunsets or wildlife). Keep to a maximum of 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me capture special moments and the atmosphere. For example, I often photograph sunsets from the coastal promenade and scenic hills near my town, and sometimes I take close-up shots of birds when I visit the jungle.

Gợi ý: Make the response slightly longer with a topic sentence and one supporting reason connected by a linking word. Correct agreement (use 'they have' or 'rural areas have') and add a brief personal example to be more specific.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because they tend to have clear blue skies, vast fields and fresh air. For instance, when I visit the countryside near my parents' village I enjoy walking along country lanes and taking photos of the wide-open landscape.

Gợi ý: Fix vocabulary and grammar errors and make the idea clearer. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g., 'I prefer views in my own country'), replace 'wheels' with 'views', and explain the emotional connection with one concrete detail. Use linking words to connect reasons and an example to illustrate how it feels meaningful.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because they feel more meaningful and familiar to me. For example, seeing the old streets and seaside where I grew up brings back memories of family trips and connects the past with the present.

× I enjoy taking picture of different views because I like to capture the moment and the atmosphere, especially for now photographing sunset at the page and scenic hills.

✓ I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I like to capture the moment and the atmosphere, especially now photographing sunsets at the beach and scenic hills.

Errors: 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match 'different views' (Singular and plural issue, ID 1). 'for now photographing' is awkward; 'especially now photographing' is better but still more natural as 'especially now, photographing'. 'sunset' should be plural 'sunsets' when speaking generally. 'the page' is likely a typo for 'the beach' — corrected to 'beach'. Suggestions: Use plural nouns when referring to multiple instances (pictures, sunsets). Place 'now' as an adverb appropriately (e.g., 'especially now, photographing...'). Check for typographical errors (page -> beach).

× And sometimes I take pictures of wildlife in the jungle.

✓ And sometimes I take pictures of wildlife in the jungle.

This sentence is already grammatically correct. 'pictures' and 'wildlife' are correctly used. No change needed.

× I prefer views in rural areas because it has clear blue skies, vast fields and fresh air.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because they have clear blue skies, vast fields, and fresh air.

Error: 'it has' does not agree with the plural subject 'views' (Subject-verb agreement, ID 27). Use plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'have'. Also add a comma before 'and' in a list for clarity. Suggestion: Match pronouns and verbs to the number of the noun they refer to; here 'views' is plural so use 'they have'.

× I prefer wheels in my own country because when I travel in my country and see the views, I feel meaningful and familiar.

✓ I prefer walks/places/views in my own country because when I travel in my country and see the views, I feel a sense of meaning and familiarity.

Error: 'wheels' is incorrect word choice (likely a wrong pronoun/word) — this is vocabulary misuse treated as pronoun/word error (Incorrect use of pronouns, ID 12). The adjectives 'meaningful and familiar' are used incorrectly to describe the speaker's feelings. Better to say 'I feel a sense of meaning and familiarity' or 'I feel that it is meaningful and familiar.' Suggestions: Use the correct noun that fits context (e.g., 'views', 'places', or 'walks'). To describe emotions, use nouns ('a sense of...') or appropriate adjectives with a subject ('it feels meaningful').

× Their emotional connection at home between the past, present and future.

✓ There is an emotional connection at home between the past, present, and future.

Error: Fragment sentence lacking a clear subject-verb structure (Sentence structure errors, ID 26). The original begins with 'Their' but does not connect to a main clause; it's unclear what 'their' refers to. Correction uses 'There is' to introduce the existence of the connection. Suggestions: Ensure each sentence has a subject and verb; avoid fragments. If 'their' was intended to refer to 'views' or 'I', make that explicit (e.g., 'I feel their emotional connection...').