Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Порада: зробіть відповідь більш природною та граматично правильною, використовуйте коротке тематичне речення, потім 1–2 уточнювальні деталі. Уникайте плутаних слів (наприклад, ‘jewellery’ для збереження фото) та зайвої репетиції. Працюйте над правильним вживанням герундіїв і порядком слів.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos of different views, especially sunsets and interesting cityscapes. I usually save my best shots on my phone and organize them into albums so I can look back at them later.

Gợi ý: Порада: відповідайте чітко і послідовно — тема, причина, приклад. Уникайте суперечностей (ви сказали «urban» потім «likes nature»). Використовуйте зв’язки (because, however, although) і правильні форми іменників та прикметників («these views», «more natural»).

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I find the countryside more peaceful and natural. For example, I enjoy wide open fields and forests where I can relax and take clear landscape photos.

Gợi ý: Порада: використовуйте прості й правильні формулювання — спочатку відповідь, потім пояснення з прикладом. Уникайте некоректних слів і виразів («yous», «boring of», «raise the whole world») і перевіряйте узгодження дієслів (I want).

Ví dụ: I enjoy the views in my own country because they are familiar and beautiful, but I also like seeing views in other countries to experience different landscapes and cultures. For instance, I would love to photograph coastal scenes in another country to compare them with those at home.

× Yes I do. I'm the type of person who likes to take pictures of everything and it's really fascinating me to take more pictures and I like to save them in my jewellery and then looking for this incredible looks, sunsets or something like that.

✓ Yes, I do. I'm the type of person who likes to take pictures of everything and I find it really fascinating to take more photos. I like to save them in my album and then look for incredible scenes, sunsets, or something like that.

The student incorrectly used 'it's really fascinating me' instead of 'I find it really fascinating', which requires a subject + verb structure rather than passive-like construction (Verb + -ing issue). 'looking for' should be the base verb 'look for' to follow 'then'. 'jewellery' is a wrong noun for storing photos; 'album' is correct vocabulary. Also 'looks' should be 'scenes' or 'views'. Suggestions: use 'I find it fascinating' or 'it fascinates me', use 'to look for' after 'then', and use correct nouns like 'album' or 'gallery'.

× I prefer views in urban areas because for me this views looks more, uh, naturally and picturesque.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because, for me, these views look more natural and picturesque.

The student used 'this views' (wrong demonstrative and number) and 'looks' with plural subject. This is an article/demonstrative and subject-verb agreement issue (Article errors and plural agreement). 'This' should be 'these' for plural, and 'looks' should be 'look'. 'more, uh, naturally and picturesque' mixes adverb and adjective incorrectly; use 'more natural and picturesque' or 'more naturally and picturesquely' depending on meaning. Suggestion: match demonstrative to number and ensure adjectives modify nouns, not adverbs.

× So, uh, I'm that kind of person who likes nature more than city halls and city center.

✓ So, I'm the kind of person who prefers nature to city halls and city centers.

The student used 'likes nature more than city halls and city center' which is awkward and mixes singular/plural. Use comparative structure 'prefers X to Y'. Also 'city center' should be plural or matched: 'city centers' or 'the city center'. Suggestion: use 'prefer A to B' and keep consistent number for place nouns.

× I really love yous in my country, but I am a little bit boring of those views.

✓ I really love the views in my country, but I am a little bored with those views.

'yous' is not correct; likely meant 'views'. 'a little bit boring of' is incorrect: 'boring' describes something that causes boredom; the speaker should use 'bored with' to describe their feeling. Suggestion: use correct noun 'views' and the adjective 'bored' with preposition 'with'.

× So I would like to open for me, uh, the view for the other countries.

✓ So I would like to open myself up to views from other countries.

'open for me the view for the other countries' is unidiomatic. Use reflexive or idiomatic expression 'open myself up to' or 'be open to'. This is a modal/verb usage and sentence structure issue. Suggestion: use 'I would like to be open to views from other countries' or 'I would like to see views from other countries'.

× And I'm that kind of person who want to raise the whole world.

✓ And I'm the kind of person who wants to explore the whole world.

The clause 'who want' has incorrect third person singular agreement; it should be 'who wants' because the relative pronoun refers to 'I'/'the kind of person'. Also 'raise the whole world' is incorrect verb choice; likely intended 'explore' or 'see'. Suggestion: use correct subject-verb agreement 'who wants' and choose appropriate verb like 'explore' or 'see'.