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Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Uh, yes, I do. I consider pictures as a souvenir to, uh, to the places I've been and it can be a nice memories for, to remind me of this places, uh, when I'm not, not around anymore.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

I do not have a preference on both. I think each of them have their unique buildings. The rural areas captures nice landscapes and different flowers. We have not seen the paper areas and the urban areas have lots of sky towers and that is also something special in City side.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

I also don't have a preference on each my country, I'm from China and it's really huge and we have a lot of different cultures and different views. However, in other countries there are also different culture and such, different landscapes and buildings. So I think both of them are very pretty unique.

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Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 回答总体能表达意思,但有语法、重复和词汇错误,且有较多犹豫词(uh)和赘述。建议:1) 使用一到两句的主题句直接回答(例如:Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views.);2) 避免重复与填充词,尽量用简洁的句子;3) 修正语法和名词单复数(a souvenir / nice memory / these places);4) 增加一两处具体细节(例如拍摄特定场景或用途)并用连接词衔接。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I often photograph landscapes and cityscapes as souvenirs, because they help me remember the atmosphere of the places I visited. For example, I always take pictures of sunsets and local streets to share with my family and look back on later.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容有意思但表达混乱,存在语法错误和不连贯句子。建议:1) 用一句话明确表达偏好或表示不偏好(I don’t have a strong preference; both are attractive.);2) 使用连接词(for example, whereas)组织对比;3) 提供具体细节并修正词汇和语法(rural areas capture landscapes / skyscrapers in urban areas);4) 控制在三到四句内,避免模糊或不完整的句子。

Ví dụ: I don’t have a strong preference because both offer something unique. For example, rural areas have beautiful landscapes and colorful flowers, whereas urban areas feature impressive skyscrapers and interesting street scenes. So I enjoy photographing both for different reasons.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 答案能表达双方都喜欢,但有语法和词汇错误、句子重复且不够精炼。建议:1) 开头用一句清晰的主题句(I don’t really prefer one over the other.);2) 用一到两句分别说明国内和国外景色的具体吸引点,使用连接词(for example / moreover);3) 避免重复(different culture / different views);4) 注意语法(my country / cultures)。

Ví dụ: I don’t really prefer one over the other. For example, in my country, China, there are vast landscapes and diverse local cultures that make each region visually unique. Meanwhile, other countries often have different architectural styles and natural scenes, so I enjoy photographing both.

Ngữ pháp

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I consider pictures as a souvenir to, uh, to the places I've been and it can be a nice memories for, to remind me of this places, uh, when I'm not, not around anymore.

I consider pictures as souvenirs of the places I've been, and they can be nice memories to remind me of those places when I'm not around anymore.

错误类型:形容词/副词使用及相关名词形式错误。说明:原句中用单数 "a souvenir" 与后文复数、泛指的语境不一致,且 "nice memories" 前的动词主语与单数单词不一致;"for, to remind me of this places" 中不定式和介词混用,且 "this places" 应为复数的 those/these。建议:将 "a souvenir" 改为复数 "souvenirs",把介词短语改为 "of the places",使用复数代词 "they" 指代 pictures,并用 "those places" 指代不在场的那些地方,去掉多余填词(uh, to)。

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× I do not have a preference on both.

I do not have a preference for either.

错误类型:主谓一致/搭配错误。说明:短语 "preference on both" 非标准表达;表示两者都不偏好应使用 "no preference for either" 或 "I don't prefer either"。建议:用 "for either" 或 "between the two" 等正确搭配,避免使用 "both" 与否定连用造成歧义。

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× I think each of them have their unique buildings.

I think each of them has its unique buildings.

错误类型:主谓一致。说明:结构 "each of them" 主语为单数,谓语动词应使用单数 "has";代词也应与单数一致,用 "its"(指地方的设施)或改为复数主语改动为 "they have"。建议:如果保留 each,动词用单数并用单数代词;或改写为 "They each have unique buildings"。

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× The rural areas captures nice landscapes and different flowers.

The rural areas capture nice landscapes and different flowers.

错误类型:主谓一致。说明:主语 "The rural areas" 为复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式 "capture",而不是单数 "captures"。建议:把动词改为复数形式或改为单数表达(例如 "The rural area captures...")。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× We have not seen the paper areas and the urban areas have lots of sky towers and that is also something special in City side.

We have not seen the rural areas, and the urban areas have lots of tall buildings; that is also something special in the city.

错误类型:介词/词汇使用不当。说明:原句中 "paper areas" 可能为误说,应为 "rural areas";"sky towers" 不常用,常说 "tall buildings" 或 "skyscrapers";"in City side" 用法不正确,应为 "in the city" 或 "on the city side"。建议:确认想表达的词(rural 而非 paper),使用常见搭配如 "tall buildings" 或 "skyscrapers",并使用定冠词和小写地名常规("the city")。

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× I also don't have a preference on each my country, I'm from China and it's really huge and we have a lot of different cultures and different views.

I also don't have a preference between my own country and others. I'm from China and it's really huge; we have a lot of different cultures and different landscapes.

错误类型:主谓一致/结构错误。说明:短语 "on each my country" 不符合英语习惯,应改为 "between my own country and others" 或类似表达;另外用词 "views" 在此语境常用 "landscapes"。建议:重构句子,使用正确介词短语 "preference between" 或 "preference for",并用更合适的名词 "landscapes" 表达地貌/风景。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× However, in other countries there are also different culture and such, different landscapes and buildings.

However, in other countries there are also different cultures, different landscapes, and different buildings.

错误类型:介词或名词复数使用不当。说明:"different culture" 应为复数 "different cultures" 以匹配泛指不同国家的多样性;句子中逗号应整理以列举事项。建议:将 "culture" 改为复数,并清晰列出并列项。

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× So I think both of them are very pretty unique.

So I think both of them are quite unique.

错误类型:形容词/副词使用不当。说明:"very pretty unique" 是混合用法错误:"pretty"(相当)和 "very"(非常)不能叠用在同一形容词前,且 "pretty unique" 已为口语表达(意为 "相当独特"),更合适的正式表达为 "quite unique" 或 "very unique"。建议:选用一个程度副词,如 "quite" 或 "very",避免叠加,确保语气恰当。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
NiceEnjoyable; Pleasant; Polite; Subtle; Fine
PrettyAttractive; Quite; Beautify
SpecialExceptional; Distinctive; Momentous; Specific
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