Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words. Also correct minor grammar (e.g., “different views” not “different view”, “mountains” plural).

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing landscapes, especially mountains and the seaside, because they offer diverse colours and textures. For example, mountain scenes often have lush greenery and dramatic light, which make my photos more striking.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer, then explain with specific reasons and one example. Avoid vague phrases and unclear vocabulary. Use linking words (e.g., “but”, “because”, “for example”) to make your point coherent.

Ví dụ: It depends on my mood, but I usually prefer urban views because I like modern architecture and lively street scenes. For example, tall apartment buildings, illuminated malls and neon signs create interesting contrasts and lighting for photographs.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then give specific reasons and one clear example. Fix grammar and awkward phrases (e.g., “I prefer views in other countries, especially Canada and the USA”). Avoid unclear or incorrect expressions like “angry forest.”

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries, especially Canada, because I love snowy mountain landscapes and big waterfalls. For example, I would like to visit Niagara Falls and photograph the misty falls and nearby forests, which would create dramatic winter images.

× I love taking pictures from different view from the mountain, from the hill, like, oh, like from the seaside.

✓ I love taking pictures of different views from the mountains, from the hills, and from the seaside.

Use 'taking pictures of' (correct preposition) and pluralize 'view' to 'views' because multiple locations are mentioned; 'mountain' and 'hill' should be plural when speaking generally. Also use parallel structure and commas to separate items.

× I think most probably I like mountain because it's full of nature, it's full of greenery.

✓ I think I probably like mountains the most because they are full of nature and greenery.

Use proper word order: 'I probably like X the most'. 'Mountain' should be plural 'mountains' for general preference; match plural subject with plural verb 'are'. Combine repeated phrases to avoid redundancy.

× I like that different views of, uh, photo pictures I take.

✓ I like the different kinds of photos I take of those views.

Improve noun order: 'photo pictures' is redundant; use 'photos'. Clarify 'different views' by saying 'different kinds of photos I take of those views'.

× It depends on the mood.

✓ It depends on my mood.

Add the possessive pronoun 'my' to specify whose mood is meant.

× I think it's so modern dress.

✓ I think it's very modern.

'Modern dress' is incorrect here; likely meant 'very modern'. Remove 'dress' and use 'very' as appropriate intensifier.

× I like that means I took a city sights.

✓ I mean I like city sights.

Simplify phrase: 'that means I took a city sights' is ungrammatical. Use 'I mean' and 'city sights' (no 'a').

× Uh, I think it's probably have a high, high apartment and the malls like that.

✓ I think there are probably tall apartment buildings and malls there.

Use 'there are' to introduce existence (There be issue) and plural nouns for general reference. 'High apartment' should be 'tall apartment buildings'.

× The lighting was so different and uh, they took in modern Reds in modern resin like that.

✓ The lighting is very different, and there are modern reds and modern designs like that.

Original contains unclear phrases. Use 'is' for present general description or 'was' if past; here general preference -> 'is'. 'Reds' likely refers to red colors; 'resin' seems wrong, use 'designs'. Clarify meaning.

× I like most of Canada and America and uh, I like mostly probably I Canada because I like the snow view, like, uh, Mountain View, like a snow view and they have a major falls that there is an angry forest.

✓ I like Canada and the United States, but I probably like Canada the most because I like snowy mountain views and the major waterfalls surrounded by forests.

Fix country names and order: 'most of Canada and America' is incorrect. Use 'Canada and the United States'. Reorder 'probably I Canada' to 'I probably like Canada the most'. Use plural 'views' and correct phrases 'major waterfalls' and 'forests' (not 'angry forest').

× It's a beautiful view of for me. I want, I think in my future, I want to go there and I want to take pictures.

✓ It's a beautiful place for me. I think in the future I want to go there and take pictures.

Remove redundant 'I want' repetition. Use 'in the future' rather than 'in my future'. Use 'go there and take pictures' (do not repeat 'I want'). 'View of for me' is ungrammatical; 'place for me' or 'view for me' fixes meaning.