Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve clarity, grammar and reduce hesitation. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct grammar (especially 'especially' and tense), and add one specific supporting reason with a linking word. Limit to 3–4 sentences and avoid filler sounds like 'uh'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos, especially selfies. When I travel, I like to take a selfie at a landmark because it helps me remember the trip. For example, I always take a picture in front of famous buildings or natural scenery to share with friends.

Gợi ý: Be direct and correct grammar (article and plural forms). Use a clear reason and a linking word to connect ideas. Replace vague words like 'motors' with specific nouns and describe what you like about rural views.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because they offer peaceful, natural backgrounds. For example, fields and trees make attractive, uncluttered backdrops for photos, and the lighting is often softer than in cities.

Gợi ý: Clarify the main point and fix vocabulary errors ('floors' should be 'flowers' or 'scenery'). Give a concise opinion and a specific reason or example using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words.

Ví dụ: I don't mind whether views are in my country or abroad; what matters is the scenery. For instance, I love places with colourful flowers or dramatic coastlines because they make striking photos.

× Yes, it's specially taking selfies.

✓ Yes, especially taking selfies.

The student used 'specially' but intended the adverb 'especially'. This is a word choice error related to adverb form; 'especially' is the correct adverb to emphasize a preference. Suggestion: use 'especially' for emphasis and avoid 'specially' which means 'for a special purpose'.

× I like, uh, taking selfies in different views or different places.

✓ I like taking selfies in different places or with different views.

The sentence is understandable but awkward. Reordering and using 'with' clarifies the relationship between 'selfies' and 'views'. Suggestion: keep the gerund 'taking' but arrange noun phrases clearly: 'in different places' or 'with different views'.

× When I travel to different places, I immediately take a selfie from the place which I love.

✓ When I travel to different places, I immediately take a selfie at a place I like.

Using 'from the place which I love' is awkward and unidiomatic. Use 'at' for location and 'I like' instead of 'which I love' for natural speech. Suggestion: use 'at' for the location of the selfie and simpler relative clause 'I like'.

× I think I should prefer a rural areas because I think it will be good spot for taking photos, taking selfies behind motors and greeneries.

✓ I think I prefer rural areas because I think they are good spots for taking photos, selfies with motorcycles, and greenery.

Errors: 'a rural areas' mixes singular article with plural noun; 'should prefer' is unnatural modal usage; 'it will be good spot' wrong number and article; 'behind motors and greeneries' is unidiomatic. Changes: remove 'a', use plural 'rural areas', change 'should prefer' to 'prefer' for simple preference, make verbs and nouns agree ('they are good spots'), and replace 'motors' with 'motorcycles' and 'greeneries' with 'greenery'. Suggestion: ensure noun number matches articles and use natural collocations.

× Soon there is nothing about country, it's uh, just about the place which I wish visit.

✓ It's not really about the country; it's just about the place I want to visit.

The original 'Soon there is nothing about country' is ungrammatical and likely mis-said. 'There is nothing about country' misuses the 'there is' construction and lacks articles. Also 'which I wish visit' misses 'to' after 'wish'. Correction uses natural negative 'It's not really about the country' and 'I want to visit'. Suggestion: use 'want to' or 'wish to' with 'to', and use 'the country' when speaking generally.

× If uh, the place is surrounded by beautiful floors, colourful floors, then it, it will be nice, you know.

✓ If the place is surrounded by beautiful flowers, colourful floors, then it will be nice.

The student used 'floors' twice and likely meant 'flowers' for natural scenery; repeated 'floors' is incorrect collocation. Also double 'it, it' is filler; reduce to 'it will be nice'. Suggestion: choose appropriate nouns ('flowers' for plants, 'floors' only for ground surfaces) and avoid repetition and filler words.