Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant with a good example, but there are some grammatical errors and slight word-choice issues. Improve accuracy: correct plural/singular errors (e.g. “a wide shot” or “wide shots”), use articles and prepositions properly (“from different perspectives”), and avoid slightly long phrasing to sound more natural. Keep responses within 2–4 concise sentences and vary vocabulary slightly (e.g. “compose” or “frame”).

Ví dụ: Yes — I enjoy photographing different scenes and I try to capture each subject from several angles. For example, when I visit a landmark I take wide shots, close-ups and side views so I can choose the best composition.

Gợi ý: Good idea and specific details, but the answer ends abruptly and includes an incomplete phrase. Fix sentence completion and minor grammar (pluralize “sunsets” or add article “a dramatic sunset”). Use a linking phrase to connect reason and examples (e.g. “for instance” or “because of this”). Keep the reply concise and ensure it has a clear topic sentence plus supporting details.

Ví dụ: I prefer photographing in rural areas because the natural scenery is more picturesque and unspoiled. For instance, I like capturing rolling hills, quiet country lanes and dramatic sunsets, which all feel more peaceful than city scenes.

Gợi ý: The idea is good — you like photographing worldwide — but the answer is grammatically weak and contains unclear filler (“let me say, it is kind of”). Make a clear topic sentence (e.g. “I prefer taking photos in many different countries”), give a concise reason, and finish with a specific example. Avoid vague fillers and aim for precise vocabulary like “unique landscapes” or “distinct cultures.”

Ví dụ: I prefer taking photos in different countries because each place has unique landscapes and cultural features. For example, coastal villages, mountain ranges and urban markets abroad offer scenes I can't find at home.

× I take a wide shots, close-ups and shots from different perspective so I can choose the best composition.

✓ I take wide shots, close-ups, and shots from different perspectives so I can choose the best composition.

The noun forms must agree in number. 'A wide shots' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'wide shots' without 'a'. 'Perspective' should be plural 'perspectives' to match 'shots from different ...' Suggestion: ensure articles match noun number and make parallel list items consistent.

× I take a wide shots, close-ups and shots from different perspective so I can choose the best composition.

✓ I take wide shots, close-ups, and shots from different perspectives so I can choose the best composition.

Word order and parallel structure require consistent noun phrases. 'Wide' correctly modifies 'shots' but the article 'a' was incorrect; include commas for list clarity. Maintain parallel forms when listing items.

× I prefer taking photographs in rural areas because the natural scenery is more picturesque and unspoiled.

✓ I prefer taking photographs in rural areas because the natural scenery is more picturesque and unspoiled.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. Mentioned to confirm no adjective error: 'more picturesque and unspoiled' are correct comparative and coordinate adjectives.

× For example, I enjoy capturing rolling hills, quiet country lanes and dramatic sunset, which.

✓ For example, I enjoy capturing rolling hills, quiet country lanes, and dramatic sunsets.

The fragment ends with ', which.' creating an incomplete clause. Remove the dangling relative pronoun and make 'sunset' plural to match the other plural landscape items. Suggestion: avoid leaving sentence fragments and ensure lists are parallel.

× I prefer to take photos from all the countries over all the globe because each country has its own beautiful nature and let me say, it is kind of.

✓ I prefer to take photos in countries all over the globe because each country has its own beautiful nature, and, let me say, it is kind of...

Incorrect preposition 'from' with 'countries' should be 'in countries'. 'Over all the globe' is awkward; use 'all over the globe'. Added commas for parenthetical phrase 'let me say'. The ending 'it is kind of' is informal and incomplete; either finish the thought (for example, 'it is kind of inspiring') or remove it. Suggestion: use 'in' for locations, 'all over' for distribution, and avoid unfinished phrases.

× I prefer to take photos from all the countries over all the globe because each country has its own beautiful nature and let me say, it is kind of.

✓ I prefer to take photos in countries all over the globe because each country has its own beautiful nature; let me say, it is quite inspiring.

Revised to fix preposition and word order and to complete the thought. Replaced informal 'it is kind of' with 'it is quite inspiring' to provide a clear ending. Suggestion: complete your sentence and choose appropriate descriptive phrase.