Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce hesitation and grammatical errors, give a clear topic sentence, and add one specific detail using linking words. Keep it within 3–4 sentences. For example, say you enjoy photographing views, explain when you do it, and why it matters (memory, sharing, learning). Avoid repeated words and incorrect verb forms.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, when I travel I often photograph landscapes and cityscapes through the window because they help me keep memories of places I visit. Also, I sometimes share these photos with family so they can see where I have been.

Gợi ý: Give a clear preference sentence, support it with 1–2 specific reasons connected by linking words, and correct basic grammar (tense and prepositions). Avoid vague phrases like 'the main thing' without explanation.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the lively atmosphere and well-kept parks. For instance, cities often have beautiful gardens and architecture, which I find relaxing and interesting to photograph.

Gợi ý: Clarify which you prefer with a direct statement, then give a specific, coherent reason. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and correct references (hometown vs other countries). Keep it concise and avoid unrelated details or unclear place names.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different cultural landmarks and landscapes that I haven't seen at home. For example, I would like to photograph famous temples and coastal areas abroad to compare them with places like the Golden Temple near my hometown.

× Is yes I like to taking pictures of different views.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.

The sentence uses incorrect question word order and misuses the pronoun 'Is'. Replace 'Is yes' with 'Yes' and correct the verb form from 'to taking' to the gerund 'taking' after 'like'. Use a comma after 'Yes' for clarity.

× Like when I whenever I was on traveling I saw a lot of views in my outside the window and I click lot of images about them because of I, I I take for my for a memories.

✓ When I travel, I see a lot of views outside the window and I take many pictures of them for my memories.

Multiple problems: 'was on traveling' is incorrect — use simple present or simple past depending on context; 'when I travel' suits habitual action. 'in my outside the window' is incorrect preposition/order; use 'outside the window'. 'I click lot of images' uses informal verb 'click' and missing quantifier—use 'take many pictures'. 'because of I, I I take for my for a memories' is ungrammatical; simplify to 'for my memories'. Use consistent tense (present for habitual actions) and correct verb+ -ing to 'travel' or gerund when needed.

× I prefer views in urban areas because I firstly I like it and sometimes when I went to there I definitely to to relaxation about urban areas.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because I like them, and sometimes when I go there I definitely relax in urban areas.

Pronoun agreement: 'I like it' should be 'I like them' because 'views' is plural. 'Firstly I like it' redundant 'firstly'—omit or place properly. 'when I went to there' mixes past tense and incorrect preposition—use 'when I go there'. 'I definitely to to relaxation' is ungrammatical—use verb 'relax'. Maintain present/simple tense for preferences.

× The main thing is the beautiful things are like a good garden.

✓ The main attraction is beautiful things like a well-kept garden.

Awkward structure: 'The main thing is the beautiful things are like' is ungrammatical. Use noun 'attraction' and parallel structure 'beautiful things like a well-kept garden'. 'a good garden' is vague; 'well-kept garden' is clearer.

× In other countries I prefer in view in my hometown because I when I send since my birthday, I not went to any locate any other location Sir like the Gold Temple, Baga border and etcetera.

✓ I prefer views in my hometown rather than in other countries because since my birthday I have not been to any other places, such as the Golden Temple or Baga Beach.

Pronoun and preposition errors: 'In other countries I prefer in view in my hometown' is confused—clarify preference. 'when I send since my birthday' is incorrect; likely 'since my birthday'. Use present perfect 'have not been' to express experience up to now, not simple past 'not went'. 'locate any other location Sir' is ungrammatical; simplify to 'any other places'. Use correct names ('Golden Temple') and appropriate noun ('Baga Beach') if intended. Remove unnecessary 'Sir'.