Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course. Taking picture of different views. Umm, it is. It's important to me because I'm basically is a photographer in my school, so taking pictures can make a lot of different sites more powerful in my life.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I think rural areas is more more more make me prefer because I like the things that more nature. It's can relaxed me a lot my body and heart.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer wheeled in other countries like European or some natural natural country like Finland. It's is very icy and I love that. I really love it.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 内容要更流畅和语法正确。回答应先给出明确的主题句,然后用一两句具体细节支持,注意主谓一致、时态和冠词的使用,避免重复填充词(如 “umm”)。可用连接词使句子更连贯,例如“because”或“which”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. I am the photographer at my school, so I often take landscape and event photos, which helps me capture memorable scenes and improve my skills.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 要先直接回答问题(urban or rural),然后给出具体原因并用连接词,使句子语法正确。避免重复词,注意形容词和动词形式,以及“relax”用法。建议用一至两句补充具体例子说明为什么放松或喜欢自然。
Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I love nature and quiet surroundings. For example, walking among trees and lakes helps me relax and clear my mind after a busy week.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 先明确回答(own country or other countries),然后给出具体原因并举例。注意发音或写作中单词拼写(e.g. "Europe" not "European" as a noun here),避免重复和语法错误。可说明喜欢的风景特点(如冰雪、建筑)并用连词连接句子。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries, especially places like Finland or parts of Europe. I enjoy snowy landscapes and unique architecture, which offer different photographic opportunities than my home country.
× Taking picture of different views.
✓ Taking pictures of different views.
该句缺少主语和/或用了单数名词而实际应为复数。此处谈的是拍摄不同的景色,应该用复数pictures并通常需要完整句子结构(如:"I like taking pictures of different views.")。建议在句首加上主语并使用正确的名词单复数形式。
× Umm, it is.
✓ Umm, it is.
此句原文短促但语法本身并无明显主谓不一致问题。但在语境中更自然的表达是加以扩展如"Umm, it is important to me."(这对我很重要)。若保留简短回答,需确保上下文明确。
× I'm basically is a photographer in my school, so taking pictures can make a lot of different sites more powerful in my life.
✓ I'm basically a photographer at my school, so taking pictures makes many different scenes more meaningful in my life.
原句含有主谓重复("I'm... is")导致主谓不一致,应删除多余的be动词并改正介词用法:在校园内通常用"at my school"而非"in"。此外,主语'taking pictures'为单数活动,谓语应用单数动词'makes';'sites'用词不当,应为'scenes'或'places',并将"more powerful"改为更自然的"more meaningful"。建议去掉重复的be动词,调整介词和动词形式。
× I think rural areas is more more more make me prefer because I like the things that more nature.
✓ I think rural areas make me prefer them because I like things that are more natural.
原句中主语"rural areas"是复数,但后面用单数动词"is",造成主谓不一致;此外"make me prefer"不自然,应说"make me prefer them"或更直接"I prefer rural areas"。"the things that more nature"中形容词用法错误,应改为"are more natural"。建议使主语与动词在人称与数上保持一致,并使用正确的形容词形式。
× It's can relaxed me a lot my body and heart.
✓ It can relax my body and heart a lot.
原句中把情态/助动结构和被动或形容词混用("It's can relaxed")是不正确的。应使用情态动词"can"加动词原形"relax",并将宾语顺序调整为自然顺序"relax my body and heart"。建议去掉多余的"is",动词用原形并注意宾语位置。
× I prefer wheeled in other countries like European or some natural natural country like Finland.
✓ I prefer traveling to other countries like those in Europe or natural countries like Finland.
原句存在拼写和介词问题:"wheeled"拼写不当且语义不明,应为"traveling to"或类似表达;"European"需作形容词修饰"countries"或用"those in Europe";重复"natural"需删去。建议使用正确的动词短语(travel to)并用恰当的名词短语表达。
× It's is very icy and I love that.
✓ It is very icy and I love that.
原句出现了重复的系动词"It's is",造成语法错误。应保留单个形式如"It is"或缩写"It's"。建议删除多余的词,保持句子简洁。