Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like taking pictures of different views. Absolutely, I loved copying different sensi sincerity whenever I traveling and I think it was very relaxing. Also I really like take photo to the social media.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I prefer the view in urban areas because in the evening when the wind building all light up, it was very exciting and impressed me a lot, so I love you very more.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer wheels in my own countries because I I realize the local cultures and the local sensity and it's make me comfortable and proud.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 用更自然、准确的短句直接回答问题,减少语法错误和多余重复。注意正确使用动词时态、名词和介词(例如:traveling, take photos, social media),并用一两个具体细节支持观点。可控制在最多五句话内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I find it relaxing to capture scenes when I travel, because each place has its own atmosphere. For example, I often photograph sunsets and street scenes to share on social media, which helps me remember the trip.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答要更清晰并使用准确的词汇与语法。先给出明确的偏好(topic sentence),然后用一两个具体原因支持,使用连词如“because”或“so”连接句子。避免不相关或错误的词(如"wind building"、"I love you very more")。
Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because the city lights and lively streets are very exciting in the evening. For instance, I enjoy photographing illuminated skyscrapers and busy pedestrian areas because they feel energetic and colourful.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,然后用一两个具体原因支持。纠正词汇错误(如"wheels"应为"views"),注意单复数和冠词("my country"),并用更准确表达描述文化带来的感受。保持句子简洁。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I feel more connected to the local culture and traditions. For example, seeing familiar architecture and festivals makes me feel comfortable and proud of my heritage.
× Absolutely, I loved copying different sensi sincerity whenever I traveling and I think it was very relaxing.
✓ Absolutely, I loved copying different senses and sincerity whenever I was traveling and I think it was very relaxing.
错误类型:动词 + -ing 形式 与 过去时/现在分词 使用问题。句中“I traveling”缺少助动词或过去进行时的形式,正确应为“I was traveling”。另外,“sensi sincerity”是不正确的词形,应该用复数名词“senses”来表达不同的感觉。建议:在表示进行的过去动作时使用“was/were + 动词-ing”;注意名词的正确拼写与单复数。
× Also I really like take photo to the social media.
✓ Also I really like taking photos for social media.
错误类型:动词 + -ing 形式 与 介词 使用问题。动词“like”后应接动名词“taking”,而非不定式“take”。此外,“photo”应为复数“photos”(泛指拍照活动),介词“to”在此处不恰当,常用“for social media”或“on social media”。建议:动词 like 后跟动名词;选择合适介词(for/on)。
× I prefer the view in urban areas because in the evening when the wind building all light up, it was very exciting and impressed me a lot, so I love you very more.
✓ I prefer the views in urban areas because in the evening when the wind and buildings all light up, it is very exciting and impresses me a lot, so I like them much more.
错误类型:现在时/主谓一致/代词使用与句子结构问题。原句时态混乱:句首使用一般现在时(I prefer),但后半句用了过去时“was”。描述习惯性或普遍事实应使用一般现在时,“it is very exciting”。动词“impress”需与主语“it”保持三单形式“impresses”。“wind building all light up”词序和复数名词错误,应为“wind and buildings all light up”。结尾“so I love you very more”完全不合适,代词错误(you)和比较用法错误,应为“so I like them much more”。建议:统一使用一般现在时描述偏好或常态;注意主谓一致和代词指代一致,保持清晰句子结构。
× I prefer wheels in my own countries because I I realize the local cultures and the local sensity and it's make me comfortable and proud.
✓ I prefer views in my own country because I can experience the local cultures and the local scenery, and it makes me feel comfortable and proud.
错误类型:单复数和动词形式问题。原句中“wheels”与上下文不符,应该是“views”。“my own countries”若指自己的国家应为单数“my own country”。短语“I I realize”有重复且语法不当,表达体验应使用“I can experience”或“I realize”都可,但更自然为“experience”。“sensity”拼写错误,应为“scenery”。此外“it's make”主谓不一致,应为“it makes”。建议:注意名词的正确选择与单复数形式,避免拼写错误;主语与动词保持人称数一致;使用恰当动词表达“体验/感受”。