Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
No, not exactly, because I am now the person who really enjoy take photos and I'm not good at take take a good photo, so I prefer to enjoy the scenery with my own eyes.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I would say I prefer rural area much more than the city area 'cause I feel the rural areas environment are more fresher and relax relaxable for me.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I would say both of them are quite enjoyable for me and the important things is what kind of the scenery that I see that I visited.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要直接且语法正确,避免自相矛盾的表达。先给出明确的主题句(喜欢或不喜欢),然后用一到两句具体原因支持,用连接词使句子连贯。注意动词形式和词序,去掉重复词。
Ví dụ: I don't really enjoy taking photos of views because I'm not confident in my photography skills. Instead, I prefer to admire the scenery with my eyes, as that helps me relax and fully appreciate the moment.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要有清晰的主题句并用具体细节支持。避免重复词,使用正确的形容词和比较结构,并用连接词解释原因。
Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas to cities because the air is fresher and the pace of life is slower. For example, I enjoy walking in the countryside where the scenery and quiet help me unwind.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 答案应更简洁并提供具体比较或例子。先给出立场(两者都喜欢或更偏向某一方),然后举例说明原因或偏好。注意语法和逻辑连接词。
Ví dụ: I enjoy views both at home and abroad, but different places offer different experiences. For instance, local scenery feels familiar and comforting, while views in other countries can be exciting because they're new and culturally different.
× No, not exactly, because I am now the person who really enjoy take photos and I'm not good at take take a good photo, so I prefer to enjoy the scenery with my own eyes.
✓ No, not exactly, because I am not the kind of person who really enjoys taking photos, and I'm not good at taking good photos, so I prefer to enjoy the scenery with my own eyes.
问题类型:动词加 -ing 形式 / 第三人称单数。句中“the person who really enjoy take photos”用法错误:修饰人称的动词需用第三人称单数形式“enjoys”,且动词后接动名词时应使用“taking”而不是不定式或原形。另处“not good at take take a good photo”应为介词后接动名词“at taking”并去掉重复词,复数“photos”更自然。改进建议:记住在“who”后面的动词根据先行词(the kind of person)决定人称和数;“be good at”后须接动名词(-ing)。
× I would say I prefer rural area much more than the city area 'cause I feel the rural areas environment are more fresher and relax relaxable for me.
✓ I would say I prefer rural areas much more than the city because I feel the rural environment is fresher and more relaxing for me.
问题类型:单数与复数 / 句子结构与形容词使用。原句中“rural area”与“city area”在比较时应使用复数或统一形式,所以改为“rural areas”与“the city”。“the rural areas environment are”语序和数不匹配,应为“the rural environment is”;“more fresher”是重复比较,正确应为“fresher”或“more fresh”(但通常用比较级“fresher”);“relax relaxable”错误且“relaxable”很少用,需改为形容词“relaxing”。改进建议:注意名词单复数一致、主谓一致以及比较级不要叠加使用(不使用“more”与“-er”同时出现);用“relaxing”表示使人放松的。
× I would say both of them are quite enjoyable for me and the important things is what kind of the scenery that I see that I visited.
✓ I would say both are quite enjoyable for me, and the important thing is what kind of scenery I visit.
问题类型:句子结构 / 主谓一致。原句“both of them are quite enjoyable”可以简化为“both are quite enjoyable”。“the important things is”主语与动词不一致,“things”应改为单数“thing”。“what kind of the scenery that I see that I visited”结构冗长且包含多余关系代词,语序不自然,改为“what kind of scenery I visit”更简洁准确。改进建议:保持主语与谓语数一致,简化冗余从句,使用正确的关系从句或直接宾语从句表达。