Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer more concise and fluent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid fillers (uh, um) and repetition. For example, mention why you take photos (memories, sharing) and a brief example of when you did so.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me preserve memories and share interesting places with friends. For example, I photographed a coastal sunset last year and later posted it on social media so my family could see the scene.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific, coherent reasons. Use linking words (for example, because, and) and avoid vague phrases and fillers. Give one concrete example or detail to illustrate your preference.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because they offer natural scenery and wildlife that cities usually lack. For example, in the countryside I can see mountains, forests and wild birds, which makes the views more peaceful and varied.

Gợi ý: Begin with a direct statement and then give two clear reasons, using linking words such as because and for example. Avoid repetition and vague terms like “very good” — be specific about what you mean by fresh or special.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it has extensive forests and diverse wildlife. For example, our national parks offer fresh air, unique plants and cultural landscapes that I cannot find elsewhere.

× Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views as I like to refer it in future and sometimes even post and, uh, tell the people, tell, tell rest of the people that this type of view is uh, possible.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I like to refer to them in the future and sometimes post them and tell other people that this type of view is possible.

Errors: incorrect verb phrase 'do like' (unnecessary emphatic do) and incorrect use of 'refer it' (verb + preposition requires object 'refer to' and plural 'them' for 'pictures'); missing articles/pronouns and awkward repetition. Suggestion: use simple present 'I like', use 'refer to' plus correct pronoun 'them' for plural 'pictures', and simplify the sentence by replacing 'tell the people, tell, tell rest of the people' with 'tell other people'. Grammar problem type ID: 8.

× I prefer rural areas, uh, as umm, there are more than what uh urban areas can offer.

✓ I prefer rural areas because they offer more than urban areas.

Errors: awkward and incorrect phrase 'there are more than what urban areas can offer' and unnecessary filler words. Suggestion: use clear comparative structure 'they offer more than urban areas' where 'they' refers to 'rural areas' and use 'because' for reason. Grammar problem type ID: 11.

× Example like in rural area we can see mountains, forests, different types of animals and get and uh.

✓ For example, in rural areas we can see mountains, forests, and different types of animals.

Errors: 'rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' to match general meaning; missing commas and an unfinished phrase 'and get and uh'. Suggestion: use 'For example' at start, plural 'rural areas', and complete the list without filler words. Grammar problem type ID: 1.

× I prefer views in my own country as my own country as as my country is well known for forests and rich culture and rich biodiversity and here there is more fresh and it is very good.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because my country is well known for its forests, rich culture, and rich biodiversity, and the air here is fresher and very pleasant.

Errors: repetition 'my own country as my own country as', missing possessive pronoun 'its' before 'forests', awkward phrase 'there is more fresh' which should describe 'air' with comparative adjective 'fresher'. Suggestion: remove repetition, use 'because' for reason, add 'its' to show possession, and specify 'the air is fresher' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 2.