Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Antwort präziser und flüssiger gestalten: Vermeide Wiederholungen (z. B. "in the in the") und unnötige Füllwörter. Beginne mit einem klaren Themen­satz, füge ein oder zwei konkrete Details hinzu (z. B. welche Motive du gern fotografierst), und schließe mit einem kurzen abschließenden Satz. Achte zudem auf korrekte Satzstruktur und Zeitform.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. I often use a small camera I keep at home and take it with me when I go hiking, because I like capturing landscapes and wildlife. It has become one of my favourite hobbies.

Gợi ý: Klarere Struktur und spezifischere Details: Verwende verbindende Wörter (z. B. "because", "for example", "especially") gezielt und vermeide Dopplungen (z. B. "of of"). Gib konkrete Beispiele, warum du das bevorzugst (z. B. Licht, Ruhe, Artenvielfalt) und beschränke dich auf maximal fünf Sätze.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because the countryside and mountains offer a calmer atmosphere and more varied wildlife. For example, I can photograph birds and wildflowers in natural light, which is harder to find in cities. This peaceful setting makes my photos more interesting.

Gợi ý: Verbesserung der Wortwahl und Grammatik: Achte auf korrekte Wörter ("fuse" ist falsch) und formuliere vollständige Sätze. Erkläre präziser, warum fremde Landschaften interessanter sind (z. B. neue cultures, different architecture, unique natural features). Nutze ein verbindendes Wort, um Erklärung zu geben und vermeide umgangssprachliche Füllphrasen wie "like".

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they offer unfamiliar landscapes and cultural features. For instance, I enjoy photographing distinctive architecture and plants I haven't seen before, which makes travel photography more exciting.

× Yes, I do like to take pictures of different views.

✓ Yes, I like to take pictures of different views.

The use of 'do' in positive declarative sentences is unnecessary and sounds emphatic or marked. Remove 'do' for a natural simple present statement indicating a habitual preference.

× I have a little camera in my room where I often like to take pictures and it's actually a very big hobby of mine.

✓ I have a small camera in my room that I often use to take pictures, and photography is actually a big hobby of mine.

Awkward phrasing: 'little' can be 'small', 'where I often like to take pictures' is unclear because 'in my room' and 'take pictures' of views conflict. Use 'that I often use to take pictures' or move location. Also replace 'it's actually a very big hobby of mine' with 'photography is actually a big hobby of mine' for clarity and conciseness.

× Also, I love going for hikes in the in the.

✓ Also, I love going for hikes in the countryside.

Original sentence is incomplete and repeats 'in the in the'. Provide a complete noun phrase to finish the idea, e.g., 'in the countryside' or 'in the mountains'.

× I prefer views in rural areas because I think the mountains are much more and have a much better atmosphere than, for example, big cities, because I like taking photos of of animals or of plants, something like that.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I think the mountains are much nicer and have a much better atmosphere than big cities. I also like taking photos of animals and plants.

'Omitted item after "much more"' and repeated word 'of'. Replace vague 'much more' with an adjective 'much nicer'. Remove unnecessary repetition and redundancy; split into two sentences for clarity. Use 'animals and plants' instead of 'of animals or of plants, something like that'.

× I prefer fuse in other countries because that is like not known to me, so I think it's much more interesting than in my own country.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because they are unfamiliar to me, so I think they are much more interesting than the views in my own country.

Several errors: 'fuse' is a typo for 'views'. 'That is like not known to me' is informal and ungrammatical; use 'they are unfamiliar to me'. Maintain consistent plural pronouns 'they' to refer to 'views'. Clarify comparison by repeating 'views' or using 'the views in my own country'.