Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce hesitation and filler words, make answer more concise and complete. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and finish the thought (why you share on social media).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. When I travel I experiment with angles and natural light to capture striking landscapes and cityscapes, which helps me improve my photography skills. I often share the best shots with friends and on social media because I like getting feedback and keeping memories organized.

Gợi ý: This answer is clear, structured and specific. To improve further, add a linking phrase to contrast briefly with urban views and avoid minor grammar errors (use singular 'countryside'). Keep it concise (2–3 sentences).

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because the fresh air, wide-open spaces and natural sounds help me unwind from city life. For example, I visit the countryside once a month to stroll along the riverbank and listen to bird songs, which I find very relaxing compared with noisy urban streets.

Gợi ý: Eliminate repetition and hesitations, correct grammar ('country' singular) and complete the contrast sentence. Begin with a clear statement, give one specific reason with an example, then briefly acknowledge the alternative using a linking word. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because they make me feel connected to my childhood—local mountains remind me of family trips. However, I also enjoy scenery abroad because different landscapes and cultures offer fresh photographic opportunities.

× I love capturing uh, sceneries and stunning landscapes and cityscapes with uh, Whenever I travel, I often uh, experiment with different angles and lighting to create an interesting shot. I also enjoy sharing it with my friends and on social media because.

✓ I love capturing scenery, stunning landscapes, and cityscapes. Whenever I travel, I often experiment with different angles and lighting to create interesting shots. I also enjoy sharing them with my friends and on social media.

Errors: 'sceneries' is an incorrect plural for scenery (uncountable) and 'it' does not agree with plural 'shots/scenes'. Also run-on sentence and unnecessary filler words. Suggestions: use 'scenery' (uncountable) or 'scenes'/'landscapes', make sentences separate for clarity, and use the plural pronoun 'them' to refer to multiple photos or shots. Grammar problem type ID:10 relates to present participle issues manifested by incorrect noun/pronoun agreement with gerund phrases; however the primary corrections follow the 'Verb in the present participle form' guidance by fixing noun forms and pronouns to match the participle ideas.

× Personally, I prefer rural views because the fresh air, wide open spaces and natural sounds help me unwind from city life.

✓ Personally, I prefer rural views because the fresh air, wide-open spaces, and natural sounds help me unwind from city life.

Error: 'wide open' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective before a noun ('wide-open spaces'). Suggestions: add the hyphen for correct adjective form and use commas in a series for clarity.

× For example, I visit the countrysides once a month to stroll along the riverbank, listen to bird songs and feel the gentle breeze, which I find very relaxing and restorative.

✓ For example, I visit the countryside once a month to stroll along the riverbank, listen to birdsong, and feel the gentle breeze, which I find very relaxing and restorative.

Errors: 'countrysides' is unusual — 'the countryside' is the correct uncountable noun. 'bird songs' can be written as 'birdsong' (uncountable) or 'birdsongs'; both are acceptable but 'birdsong' is idiomatic. Suggestions: use 'the countryside' and 'birdsong' for naturalness and correct noun usage.

× Personally, I prefer the views in my own countries because I feel personally attached to them and they bring me back my childhood memories.

✓ Personally, I prefer the views in my own country because I feel personally attached to them and they bring back my childhood memories.

Errors: 'countries' should be singular 'country' when referring to 'my own country'. Also 'bring me back my childhood memories' is unidiomatic; correct phrase is 'bring back my childhood memories' or 'remind me of my childhood'. Suggestions: use singular 'country' and the idiomatic verb phrase 'bring back'.

× For example, seeing the local mountains always reminds me of the family trips.

✓ For example, seeing the local mountains always reminds me of family trips.

Error: 'the family trips' is overly specific; 'family trips' is more natural unless referring to particular trips. Suggestion: drop 'the' for general reference or specify which trips if definite meaning is intended.

× Although I also enjoy scenery umm abroad for the different landscapes and cultures they show in.

✓ Although I also enjoy scenery abroad because of the different landscapes and cultures.

Errors: Sentence is incomplete and contains filler 'umm' and awkward ending 'they show in.' Suggestions: remove filler words, use 'because of' to link reason, and end the sentence with the noun phrase 'different landscapes and cultures' for clarity.