Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer grammatically correct, more concise, and add a linking phrase and a brief specific example. Correct verb forms and reduce repetition. For instance, start with a clear topic sentence, then add one supporting detail with a linking word.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel. For example, last summer I photographed coastal cliffs and sunsets to remember the trip, so photos help me preserve special memories.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence, use linking words to contrast reasons, correct small grammar issues, and provide one specific reason or example. Keep it to two or three sentences maximum.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because city scenes are what I see every day. For example, I find rolling hills and small villages more peaceful and photogenic, which makes them more attractive to me.

Gợi ý: Correct grammar, avoid unnecessary personal detail (age) that doesn't answer the question, and give a clear reason with a specific example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' and keep sentences concise.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I’m very familiar with the scenery at home. For example, visiting Japan’s countryside last year felt refreshing because the landscapes and architecture were completely different from what I usually see.

× I always taking pictures about beautiful scenery and this is a good way to remember a good trip.

✓ I always take pictures of beautiful scenery, and this is a good way to remember a good trip.

The original uses 'always taking' which is a verb + -ing form but not part of a continuous tense or after an auxiliary; the correct simple present is 'always take' for habitual actions. Also use the correct preposition 'of' instead of 'about'. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions and pair verbs with correct prepositions.

× I always taking pictures about beautiful scenery and this is a good way to remember a good trip.

✓ I always take pictures of beautiful scenery, and this is a good way to remember a good trip.

The preposition 'about' is incorrect with 'pictures'; the correct collocation is 'pictures of' something. Use 'take pictures of' to indicate photographing a subject.

× Yes, I like taking picture of different views, especially when I'm travelling.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, especially when I'm travelling.

The singular 'picture' is incorrect when referring to the general activity of photographing multiple views. Use the plural 'pictures'. Also 'taking pictures of' is the correct phrase for this context.

× I always can see the view but in rural areas it's more attractive to me.

✓ I can always see the view, but rural areas are more attractive to me.

Placement of the adverb 'always' is more natural before the main verb in English: 'can always see'. Also 'it's more attractive to me' refers to 'rural areas' (plural), so the verb should be plural: 'are more attractive'. Ensure subject-verb agreement with plural subjects.

× I prefer views in rural areas because I live in city so urban area is my daily life.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I live in the city, so urban areas are my daily life.

Use the definite article 'the city' when referring to the city where one lives. Also 'urban area' should be plural 'urban areas' to match 'my daily life' or rephrase to 'city life is my daily life'. Ensure consistent plurality.

× I prefer views in other countries because I live in my city for 23 years old.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I have lived in my city for 23 years.

The original mixes present tense with an age expression incorrectly. Use the present perfect 'have lived' with 'for 23 years' to indicate duration up to now. Do not include 'old' after the duration; '23 years old' describes age, not duration. Use 'for 23 years' for duration.

× I very familiar their view, so I think if in other countries the new scenery will make me feel refreshing.

✓ I am very familiar with the views here, so I think that new scenery in other countries will make me feel refreshed.

Missing auxiliary verb 'am' for 'I am very familiar' and missing preposition 'with' after 'familiar'. 'Their view' is unclear; use 'the views here' to refer to the student's country. 'Feel refreshing' is incorrect: people feel 'refreshed'. Also reword sentence order to 'new scenery in other countries' and include 'that' for clarity.