Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 응답은 이해할 수 있지만 문장이 끊기거나 중복된 표현이 있고 연결어 사용이 부족합니다. 문장 구조를 매끄럽게 고치고 불필요한 반복을 줄이세요. 또한 이유를 더 구체적으로 설명하면 답변이 풍부해집니다. 예를 들어 언제, 어떤 장면(풍경, 건축, 사람)이나 어떤 감정을 느껴 사진을 찍는지 구체적으로 말하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of beautiful views, especially when I travel abroad, because I rarely see those scenes at home. For example, I like capturing unique architecture and coastal landscapes, which help me remember the atmosphere of a place.

Gợi ý: 전반적으로 명확한 답변이지만 문장에 약간의 중복과 어색한 표현(예: 'when I when I'm')이 있습니다. 또한 연결어를 사용해 이유와 예시를 더 자연스럽게 연결하세요. 구체적인 장면이나 활동(예: 해안가에서 일출을 촬영하거나 들판에서 동물을 관찰)을 추가하면 더 설득력 있습니다.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I love the ocean and wildlife; they help me relax and breathe fresh air. For instance, I often photograph sunrise over the coast or grazing animals in a meadow, which makes me feel calm.

Gợi ý: 답변이 명확하지만 표현이 다소 반복적이며 더 구체적인 이유나 비교가 부족합니다. 'new experiences'를 구체화하고 왜 그것이 사진 촬영에 더 매력적인지 설명하세요. 또한 연결어로 문장을 더 자연스럽게 이어보세요.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new and unfamiliar scenes that I rarely see at home. For example, I enjoy photographing traditional markets or distinctive landscapes abroad, which provide fresh perspectives and memories.

× Yes, I usually like taking pictures of beautiful views, especially when I travel I try to take photos of. Views in other countries because I do not get them often.

✓ Yes, I usually like taking pictures of beautiful views, especially when I travel; I try to take photos of views in other countries because I do not see them often.

The original contains a broken sentence and incorrect sentence boundary: 'I try to take photos of. Views in other countries' creates a fragment. This is a sentence structure error. Combine the clauses with a semicolon or conjunction and correct 'get them' to 'see them' for natural English. Suggestion: join related clauses and avoid unnecessary periods, and use more natural verbs like 'see' for encountering views.

× I prefer views in rural areas because I really like the ocean and animals. I can clear my mind and get fresh air when I when I'm in rural areas.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I really like the ocean and animals. I can clear my mind and get fresh air when I'm in rural areas.

The original has a duplicated phrase 'when I when I'm', which is an adverbial clause duplication causing a placement/repetition error. Remove the repeated words to correct the adverbial clause. Suggestion: proofread for accidental repetition and read sentences aloud to catch duplicates.

× I prefer views in other countries because they are usually new experiences for me and I don't get them often, so that's why I prefer to take photos of them.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because they are usually new experiences for me and I don't see them often, so I prefer to take photos of them.

Using 'get' in 'I don't get them often' is unnatural for experiencing views; 'see' is a more appropriate verb. Also the phrase 'so that's why I prefer' is wordy; 'so I prefer' is clearer. This is a present tense usage/style issue. Suggestion: use precise verbs that match meaning ('see' for perceiving views) and simplify redundant phrases.