Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Absolutely, I like do it when I was walking on the road, I will see the sky was very beautiful. So I will take the photo of the sky. Uh, when I go to the park, I will take photos of the flowers and sun grass. I think it was a very amazing thing to take some pictures of different wire.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I like the urban areas because I like thought the buildings 1 by 1 stand on the land. It was very beautiful and I trained. The rural arms or rural airs is a little umm. I don't know how to say it.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer my country's review because my country is China's. In China use many place was beautiful, like Guangzhou, it was very it has a very tall tower, means uh, its name is Guangzhou card, and the light is very shining, many people is kind.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、语法更准确,并避免重复。先用一句主题句直接回答(肯定或否定),然后用一到两句具体细节说明你什么时候拍、拍什么和为什么拍。注意动词时态和名词单复数,避免不知道单词时使用错误词汇(如“sun grass”“wire”)。可以用连接词如“for example”或“also”使句子连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I often take photos when I’m walking because I notice interesting skies and colors. For example, in parks I like photographing flowers and grass because their shapes and colors change with the seasons.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并有清晰理由。先给出偏好(城市或乡村),然后用具体理由支持(例如建筑、灯光、便利)。避免不确定词汇或填充词(umm),用简单准确词汇替代(例如“arranged one by one”改为“lined up”)。一句主题句加一两句细节即可。
Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the sight of tall buildings lined up along the streets. They often have interesting architecture and bright lights, which make the cityscape more attractive than the quiet countryside.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更准确的词汇和清晰的例子。先说偏好(本国或国外),然后说明原因并举一两个具体地点作为例证。注意机构名和专有名词的正确表达(例如“Canton Tower”),并用连词如“for example”把句子连接起来。控制句子长度,不超过五句。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because there are many beautiful places. For example, Guangzhou has the Canton Tower, which is very tall and brightly lit at night, and the city feels welcoming and lively.
× Absolutely, I like do it when I was walking on the road, I will see the sky was very beautiful.
✓ Absolutely, I like doing it. When I was walking on the road, I saw that the sky was very beautiful.
句中应使用動名詞(doing)來表示喜好(like doing something),而不是不定式(do)。此外,描述过去的情境应使用过去时(was → saw/was)并调整句子結構以更自然:When I was walking on the road, I saw that the sky was very beautiful。如果保持一般現在習慣則可說“I like doing it when I walk on the road.”
× So I will take the photo of the sky.
✓ So I take photos of the sky.
此句描述習慣性行為,應使用一般現在時(take),而非將來時(will)。若要強調當時正在拍,可用過去時“I took a photo of the sky.”。原句並非過去分詞錯用,但根據上下文需調整時態以符合陳述習慣。
× Uh, when I go to the park, I will take photos of the flowers and sun grass.
✓ When I go to the park, I take photos of the flowers and the grass.
描述習慣性行為應使用一般現在時(take)。“sun grass”不是常用表達,改為“grass”或具體名稱。現在分詞並非必要,重點是時態一致。
× I think it was a very amazing thing to take some pictures of different wire.
✓ I think it is a wonderful thing to take pictures of different views.
使用形容詞需選擇恰當詞彙:'amazing' 可,但更自然用 'wonderful'。原句 'different wire' 為詞彙錯誤,應為 'different views'。同時根據一般陳述把時態用現在時 'is' 比較自然。
× I like the urban areas because I like thought the buildings 1 by 1 stand on the land.
✓ I like urban areas because I like the way the buildings stand side by side on the ground.
原句 'I like thought' 是錯誤用法,應為 'the way' 表示方式;'1 by 1' 非標準表達,可改為 'side by side';'land' 改為 'ground' 或 'landscape'。代詞和表達方式需更正以符合英語習慣。
× It was very beautiful and I trained.
✓ It was very beautiful and I was impressed.
原句 'I trained'(我訓練)不符合語境,應表達感受如 'I was impressed' 或 'I enjoyed it'。此外描述過去景色使用過去時 'was' 合適。
× The rural arms or rural airs is a little umm. I don't know how to say it.
✓ Rural areas are a bit, umm, different. I'm not sure how to say it.
'rural arms' 和 'rural airs' 均為拼寫/用詞錯誤,正確為 'rural areas'。主語為複數 'rural areas',故動詞應為 'are' 而非 'is'。建議用簡單詞彙 'different' 或更具體形容詞。
× I prefer my country's review because my country is China's.
✓ I prefer views in my own country because my country is China.
'country's review' 用法錯誤,應為 'views in my own country' 或 'my country's views'。'my country is China's' 是重複且語法錯誤,正確為 'my country is China'。代詞和所有格用法需調整。
× In China use many place was beautiful, like Guangzhou, it was very it has a very tall tower, means uh, its name is Guangzhou card, and the light is very shining, many people is kind.
✓ There are many beautiful places in China. For example, Guangzhou has a very tall tower called the Canton Tower, and its lights are very bright. Many people there are kind.
原句存在多處錯誤:需要使用 'There are' 引導存在句(有很多地方);'many place' 應為 'many places'(複數);時態與句子結構需分句處理;'Guangzhou card' 應為 'Canton Tower' 或 'Guangzhou Tower';'the light is very shining' 改為 'its lights are very bright' 更自然;'many people is kind' 主謂不一致,應為 'many people there are kind'(複數主語用 'are')。