Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct vocabulary and grammar, and limit to 2–3 supportive sentences. Mention motivation briefly (e.g. enjoyment, sharing) rather than vague social-media goals. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I often post scenic shots on my Instagram to share what I see with friends and to practice my photography. Because I like experimenting with composition and light, I try to capture interesting angles and colours.

Gợi ý: Clarify and correct contradictions: urban = city, rural = countryside. Give a clear preference or explain when you choose each, with specific reasons and linking words. Keep sentences grammatical and concise (max 4–5 sentences).

Ví dụ: It depends on the photo I'm aiming for. For architectural or busy street scenes I prefer urban areas because they offer interesting buildings and vibrant life. However, for peaceful landscapes I choose rural areas since the countryside gives me natural scenery and quieter compositions.

Gợi ý: Make the answer natural and specific. State a clear preference, give reasons with concrete examples (famous sites, cultural interest), and mention openness to travel as a secondary point. Use correct tenses and concise linking phrases.

Ví dụ: I generally prefer views in my own country because it has many famous monuments and landscapes that I know well and enjoy photographing. For example, I like shooting the historic buildings in my city because I can capture their details. Nevertheless, I would happily photograph abroad if I had the chance, since different countries offer new styles and colours.

× Being a photopolic person, I love to take pictures of the different views as I have a Instagram handle where I like to post the different scenery, view pictures on my Instagram account so that I can gain some followers and likes.

✓ As a photophilic person, I love to take pictures of different views because I have an Instagram account where I like to post scenery and view pictures to gain followers and likes.

The sentence contains several adjective/adverb and article usage errors. 'Photopolic' is not a correct adjective; 'photophilic' (or 'photography enthusiast') is appropriate. 'The different views' and 'the different scenery, view pictures' use the definite article incorrectly and are redundant; use 'different views' and 'scenery and view pictures'. 'I have a Instagram handle' is incorrect article usage (see separate problem type), it should be 'an Instagram account'. Also 'as' to indicate reason is better replaced by 'because' for clarity. Suggestion: replace incorrect adjective with a correct one, remove unnecessary 'the', use 'an' before vowel sound, and use clearer connector words.

× Well, it depends upon a particular picture. If I want to take a picture of a newly buildings and I prefer to go to the rural areas.

✓ Well, it depends on the particular picture. If I want to take a picture of a new building, I prefer to go to rural areas.

'Depends upon' is formal but 'depends on' is more natural here. 'A particular picture' fits better than 'a particular picture' vs original is fine; main errors: 'newly buildings' is wrong form—use adjective 'new' + singular/plural noun; 'a newly' requires participle form like 'newly built' but context suggests 'a new building' or 'new buildings'. Also remove 'the' before 'rural areas' unless referring to specific rural areas. Suggestion: use 'depends on', 'a new building' or 'new buildings', and omit 'the' before general plural areas.

× But if I want to show some peace in my pictures and show some scenic views then I prefer to go to the urban areas.

✓ But if I want to show calmness in my pictures and display scenic views, I prefer to go to rural areas.

This sentence has word choice and article/preposition issues rather than strictly third person singular; however 'show some peace' is unnatural—use 'show calmness' or 'convey a peaceful atmosphere'. Also 'scenic views' fits better. The original also confused urban/rural preference: scenic peaceful views are usually rural, so correction aligns meaning. Remove 'the' before 'urban areas' and use 'rural areas' as appropriate. Suggestion: choose correct noun ('calmness') and 'display' instead of repeating 'show'.

× Well, I prefer views in my own country as there are a lot of famous monuments and other places which I can help to show to the different kind of peoples around the world.

✓ Well, I prefer views in my own country because there are many famous monuments and other places that I can show to different kinds of people around the world.

Problems include preposition and article use and word form. 'As' is acceptable but 'because' is clearer for reason. 'A lot of' is informal; 'many' is concise. 'Which I can help to show to the different kind of peoples' is ungrammatical: use a relative clause 'that I can show to different kinds of people'. 'Peoples' as plural of 'people' refers to ethnic groups and is not needed here. Remove 'the' before 'different kind'. Suggestion: use 'many', 'that', 'different kinds of people' and avoid unnecessary 'help to'.

× But if I got a chance to go abroad and click some picture then I probably grab it.

✓ But if I get a chance to go abroad and take some pictures, I will probably grab it.

The conditional requires present simple in the 'if' clause to refer to a real future possibility: use 'if I get' not 'if I got'. 'Click some picture' is nonstandard; use 'take some pictures'. For the main clause, use 'I will probably take the chance' or 'I will probably grab it'. Also match number: 'some pictures' plural. Suggestion: use first conditional structure ('if' + present, 'will' + base verb), use 'take pictures', and ensure pronoun/reference clarity.