Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, um) and repetitions, and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Also correct small grammatical slips (e.g., 'when I go on vacation' and 'of people and places').

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. For example, when I go on vacation I photograph landscapes from different angles to capture light and depth, and I also take portraits of people in their local settings to show culture.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer first, then briefly explain with specific reasons and use linking words. Remove hesitation and repetitive phrases; correct grammar (e.g., 'take pictures of nature' and 'I also enjoy architectural design'). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because I enjoy photographing natural landscapes and wildlife. However, I also appreciate urban architecture, especially historic buildings, which provide interesting shapes and textures.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and clearly: say whether you prefer domestic or foreign views, then give a concise reason with a specific example. Avoid filler words and repetition, and use linking words (for example, however).

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because new places offer different cultures and scenery. For example, I enjoy visiting markets abroad to photograph traditional costumes and street scenes that I don't see at home.

× Yes absolutely I love uh taking pictures uh with different perspectives, especially when I go to vacation when I travel, I take a picture a lot from different angles and a lot of different places people myself, I I.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I love taking pictures from different perspectives, especially when I go on vacation or travel; I take a lot of photos from different angles and in many places.

Multiple issues: 'go to vacation' is incorrect preposition and article use; correct form is 'go on vacation' or 'go on a vacation' (Grammar problem type IDs 11 and 22). 'take a picture a lot' is awkward and uses countable noun incorrectly; use 'take a lot of photos' (IDs 1 and 14). Also reduce filler words and repeat 'I' for clarity (ID 26). Suggestions: use 'go on vacation', 'travel', 'take a lot of photos', and remove unnecessary fillers.

× I think it depends on the, umm, view, but actually I prefer, I think rural areas because I love nature and I love to take picture of nature.

✓ I think it depends on the view, but actually I prefer rural areas because I love nature and I love to take pictures of it.

Use of preposition/phrase and countable noun: 'take picture of nature' should be 'take pictures of nature' (plural for general habit) and 'of it' or 'of nature' works; also remove unnecessary commas and filler (IDs 11 and 1). Suggestions: use plural 'pictures' for repeated actions and streamline sentence structure.

× So, uh, basically I love also architectural designs and, uh, but even though that I, I.

✓ So I also love architectural designs, but even so, ...

The original mixes 'and' with 'but' and uses 'even though that' uncompleted, causing incorrect conjunction use and sentence fragment (IDs 16 and 26). Suggestion: choose either 'and' or 'but' and complete the clause, e.g. 'but even so' or 'although'.

× I think I love to explore different places, so I think it should be umm, someplace that I've never been.

✓ I love exploring different places, so I prefer someplace I've never been before.

'Love to explore' is acceptable but 'it should be' is unnatural here; use 'I prefer' to match meaning. Also 'someplace that I've never been' is improved by adding 'before' for clarity (ID 11 and 6). Suggestion: use natural collocations: 'love exploring', 'prefer someplace I've never been before.'

× Uh, so in my country also as well, but also another countries as well.

✓ I enjoy exploring places in my country as well as in other countries.

'another countries' mixes singular determiner with plural noun; should be 'other countries' or 'another country' (ID 1). Also remove redundant 'as well' repetition. Suggestion: use 'other countries' for plural or 'another country' for singular.

× And I, I think maybe cultural difference makes it more interesting, so.

✓ I think cultural differences make it more interesting.

Sentence had filler and incorrect singular/plural: 'cultural difference' should be plural 'cultural differences' to match general meaning (IDs 1 and 26). Remove trailing 'so' and duplicated 'I'. Suggestion: say 'I think cultural differences make it more interesting.'