Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và độ tự nhiên: sửa các lỗi nhỏ (ví dụ “I've have” -> “I've” hoặc “I have”), tránh mơ hồ (“CD streets” không rõ nghĩa), và rút gọn câu để tự nhiên hơn. Thêm một câu hỗ trợ ngắn với chi tiết cụ thể về phong cách chụp (gần/xa, ban ngày/hoặc hoàng hôn) và một liên từ để kết nối ý. Giữ tối đa 4–5 câu.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me preserve memories of places I visit. For example, when I travel I often photograph city streets at sunset and wide natural landscapes in the morning to capture the atmosphere. I usually focus on candid scenes rather than posed shots, so my pictures feel more authentic.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện từ vựng chính xác và cấu trúc câu: sửa các từ sai hoặc không tự nhiên (ví dụ “modern cafe and restaurants” -> “modern cafés and restaurants”; “ripe rice peels” và “buffaloes blowing the fields” là sai hoặc lạ — nên nói “ripe rice paddies” và “buffaloes grazing in the fields”). Dùng liên từ so sánh (“however”/“while”) để làm rõ ý thích. Giữ câu ngắn gọn, cụ thể và logic.

Ví dụ: I like both, but they offer different charms. Urban areas have skyscrapers, modern cafés and busy neighborhoods, which feel convenient and lively. Meanwhile, rural areas have peaceful rice paddies and water buffaloes grazing in the fields, which are relaxing and picturesque.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện tính thuyết phục và từ vựng phù hợp: tránh từ không phù hợp như “majestic cafes” và “beautiful seats” — sử dụng từ cụ thể hơn (ví dụ “historic architecture,” “scenic spots,” “hospitable people”). Thêm lý do rõ ràng vì sao thích trong nước (ví dụ: văn hóa, ngôn ngữ, kỷ niệm). Dùng một câu nối để mở rộng một chi tiết cụ thể.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I feel more connected to the culture and people. For example, our historic architecture and scenic coastal areas are unique, and the locals are very hospitable, which makes sightseeing more enjoyable.

× I like taking pictures of different views because I enjoy photographing myself and the scenery to keep memories of the places I've have visited.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views because I enjoy photographing myself and the scenery to keep memories of the places I've visited.

The error is the redundant use of 'have' in the present perfect construction 'I've have visited'. Remove the extra 'have' so it reads 'I've visited'. Suggestion: Use 'I have visited' or the contraction 'I've visited' for correct present perfect tense.

× For example, when I travel, I often take photos of CD streets or natural landscapes so I can remember the atmosphere later.

✓ For example, when I travel, I often take photos of city streets or natural landscapes so I can remember the atmosphere later.

'CD streets' appears to be a typo or incorrect word. The intended phrase is likely 'city streets'. Also 'photos of city streets' is correct plural usage. Suggestion: Use clear nouns; if you mean streets in cities, write 'city streets'.

× In urban areas we can see many skyscrapers, modern cafe and restaurants, bustling neighborhoods, and it's very convenient and modern.

✓ In urban areas we can see many skyscrapers, modern cafes and restaurants, bustling neighborhoods, and it's very convenient and modern.

Mixing singular 'cafe' with plural 'restaurants' is inconsistent. Use plural 'cafes' to match 'restaurants' and the quantifier 'many'. Suggestion: Ensure noun number agrees with quantifiers; use 'many cafes and restaurants'.

× In rural areas we can admire the peaceful ripe rice peels with buffaloes blowing the fields.

✓ In rural areas we can admire the peaceful, ripe rice paddies with buffaloes working in the fields.

The original sentence has incorrect word choices and awkward structure: 'rice peels' is wrong for 'rice paddies' or 'rice fields'; 'buffaloes blowing the fields' is incorrect—likely intended 'buffaloes working in the fields' or 'ploughing the fields'. Suggestion: Use appropriate collocations: 'rice paddies' and 'buffaloes working in the fields' or 'buffaloes ploughing the fields'.

× Of course, it's my own country.

✓ Of course, I prefer my own country.

As an answer to 'Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?' the sentence 'it's my own country' is unclear in meaning and does not directly answer the preference question. Better to say 'I prefer my own country' to express preference. Suggestion: Match the sentence to the question by using a clear verb of preference.

× My own country is famous for majestic cafes, beautiful seats and wonderful tourist areas with friendly people.

✓ My own country is famous for majestic caves, beautiful seas and wonderful tourist areas with friendly people.

There appear to be wrong words: 'cafes' likely should be 'caves' if describing natural features; 'seats' likely should be 'seas' if coastal beauty is meant. If cafes and seats were intended, meaning differs. Also ensure plural nouns match context. Suggestion: Choose correct lexical items: 'majestic caves' and 'beautiful seas' or if you meant 'cafes' and 'scenes', revise accordingly.