Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course, because I'm a student who study who study art so taking pictures is one of my hobbies and taking pictures of different views can see different types of beauty.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
Well, from my perspective I prefer views in rural areas because I think the scenery there are more beautiful and the air is more fresh and the views in urban area is so small.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
Of course, I prefer views in my own country because, you know, China is a very big country and there are all kinds of scenery, all kinds of different scenery in China. So I think China is a country with different beautiful views.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、簡潔並修正語法錯誤。可以用一到兩句話直接回答,再用一兩句具體說明原因或例子,避免重複。注意動詞時態和單複數一致,例如“I study art”而不是“who study”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I study art, so photography is one of my hobbies and helps me notice different kinds of beauty in landscapes and city scenes.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回應要更準確、語法正確並避免冗長。用一個主句表明偏好,然後用兩個具體理由支撐,使用連接詞讓句子更流暢。同時注意主謂一致(scenery is,air is fresher,urban areas are)。
Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because the scenery is more beautiful and the air is fresher, which makes outdoor photography more enjoyable.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答應避免口頭語(like "you know")和重複。先給出直接回答,再用一到兩個具體例子或細節說明中國景觀的多樣性,句子簡潔且有條理。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because China is very large and offers a wide range of landscapes, from mountains and deserts to rivers and coastal scenery.
× Yes, of course, because I'm a student who study who study art so taking pictures is one of my hobbies and taking pictures of different views can see different types of beauty.
✓ Yes, of course, because I'm a student who studies art, so taking pictures is one of my hobbies, and taking pictures of different views can show different types of beauty.
问题:主谓一致以及句子结构重复。说明:从句中主语是 who (指代 I 的 student),动词应与主语保持第三人称单数形式,因此 study 应改为 studies;原句重复出现 “who study”和标点欠缺,使句子结构混乱;另外“can see different types of beauty”主语为 taking pictures,需用主动结构 show/ reveal 更自然。建议:把 who study 改为 who studies,合并短句并用合适动词如 show,使句子更通顺。
× Well, from my perspective I prefer views in rural areas because I think the scenery there are more beautiful and the air is more fresh and the views in urban area is so small.
✓ Well, from my perspective I prefer views in rural areas because I think the scenery there is more beautiful, the air is fresher, and the views in urban areas are quite limited.
问题:主谓一致与形容词/比较结构错误。说明:scenery 是不可数名词,应使用单数谓语 is 而不是 are;'the air is more fresh' 中的比较级应使用 fresher 而不是 'more fresh';'views in urban area is so small' 中 area 应为复数或加定冠词,且 views 为复数所以谓语应为 are,且 small 用于描述 view 不太恰当,改为 limited 更自然。建议:scenery 用 is,使用比较级 fresher,统一复数/冠词用法,并选择更合适的形容词。
× Well, from my perspective I prefer views in rural areas because I think the scenery there are more beautiful and the air is more fresh and the views in urban area is so small.
✓ Well, from my perspective I prefer views in rural areas because I think the scenery there is more beautiful, the air is fresher, and the views in urban areas are quite limited.
问题:单复数错误。说明:原句中 scenery 为不可数名词不应使用复数形式的谓语 'are';urban area 应保持复数形式 'urban areas' 或加定冠词 'the urban area'。views 为复数因此谓语需用 are。建议:检查名词是可数还是不可数,确保谓语与主语在数上保持一致,并统一区域名词的单复数形式。
× Of course, I prefer views in my own country because, you know, China is a very big country and there are all kinds of scenery, all kinds of different scenery in China. So I think China is a country with different beautiful views.
✓ Of course, I prefer views in my own country because, you know, China is a very big country and there is all kinds of scenery, many different kinds of scenery in China. So I think China is a country with many beautiful and varied views.
问题:主谓一致与表达重复。说明:'all kinds of scenery' 作整体时常和单数谓语连用(there is/there are 在此可接受,但更自然的是 there is a variety of scenery 或使用 many different kinds of scenery);原句重复 'all kinds of scenery, all kinds of different scenery' 冗余;最后一句语序和形容词顺序需调整以更自然表达。建议:用 'many different kinds of scenery' 或 'a variety of scenery',避免重复,并将形容词排列为 'many beautiful and varied views' 更地道。