Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid filler words (uh, like) and redundancy. Use more precise vocabulary (e.g., “landscapes,” “memories,” “document”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I take photos to preserve memories and to document interesting places, such as city skylines or coastal landscapes. For example, I photographed a mountain sunrise last year, which helps me remember the colors and atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Give a clear preference (or state you like both) and support it with specific contrasting details using linking words (e.g., “however,” “also”). Correct grammar (e.g., ‘haven't seen,’ ‘they also have history’) and avoid repetition. Provide one concrete example for each setting.

Ví dụ: I like both urban and rural views for different reasons. In cities, I photograph modern architecture and new public art because I haven't seen them before; for example, I took photos of a new glass library last month. However, in rural areas I focus on historic buildings and natural scenery, such as an old stone bridge I visited last summer.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear, concise answer and avoid hesitations. State whether you prefer local or foreign views, then give specific reasons and an example. Use correct tense and pronouns (e.g., ‘I lived in my country for 25 years’). Keep to two to three sentences total.

Ví dụ: I enjoy photographing views both in my home country and abroad. I lived in my country for 25 years, so I like capturing familiar landscapes and traditions; for instance, I often photograph local festivals. Now that I live in Canada, I also take pictures of new scenery like snowy parks to explore different environments.

× Yes, I usually like to take pictures of different views uh like everybody likes as mine and uh it also uh, I take pictures as I can save them as a memory and also like to explore the world and find it very useful to have pictures.

✓ Yes, I usually like to take pictures of different views, like everyone does. I also take pictures so I can save them as memories, and I like to explore the world; I find it very useful to have photographs.

The original sentence uses incorrect pronouns and awkward phrasing ('everybody likes as mine', 'as I can save them as a memory'). Replace 'everybody likes as mine' with 'everyone does' to correctly refer to people in general. Use 'so I can save them as memories' to express purpose and plural 'memories' for multiple pictures. Improve cohesion by splitting into clearer clauses and replacing 'pictures' repeated with 'photographs' for variety.

× Well, I prefer both. In urban cities, most of the buildings are established recently and and most of the people didn't saw them before.

✓ Well, I prefer both. In urban cities, most of the buildings were built recently and most people haven't seen them before.

The phrase 'are established recently' is awkward; use 'were built recently' for completed past action. 'Didn't saw' is ungrammatical; the correct auxiliary with past participle is 'haven't seen' (present perfect) to indicate people up to now have not seen the buildings. This fixes verb form and tense.

× So I take pictures and I take take pictures the new things when I saw even if they are in urban state and rural areas.

✓ So I take pictures of new things when I see them, whether they are in urban or rural areas.

The original uses incorrect verb forms: 'when I saw' should be present simple 'when I see' to match habitual action. 'Take pictures the new things' needs preposition 'of' and plural pronoun agreement 'them'. 'Urban state' is unidiomatic; use 'urban areas'. This corrects verb tense and word order.

× In rural areas they are also have historical.

✓ Rural areas also have historical sites.

The phrase 'they are also have historical' mixes structures incorrectly. Use 'have' with the noun 'historical sites' to make a grammatical noun phrase. Alternatively, 'are also historical' could work, but 'have historical sites' matches intended meaning.

× Well, I prefer views, uh, in different kind of countries in my own also.

✓ Well, I prefer views in different kinds of countries, including my own.

Use plural 'kinds' after 'different' and include 'including my own' to express both foreign and domestic preferences. The original 'in my own also' is awkward pronoun placement; rephrase for clarity.

× Well, I spend my 25 years in my own country and likes to, uh, like to, uh, have pictures of my pictures, uh, or views of my own country.

✓ I spent 25 years in my own country and liked to take pictures of places there.

Tense and verb agreement errors: 'I spend my 25 years' should be past 'I spent 25 years' since it refers to a completed period. 'Likes to' is incorrect for the first person; use 'liked to' or 'liked taking'. 'Have pictures of my pictures' is redundant and unclear; change to 'take pictures of places there' to convey meaning concisely.

× And now in my, I'm in Canada and like to, uh.

✓ Now I'm in Canada and I like taking pictures here as well.

Original fragment 'And now in my, I'm in Canada and like to, uh.' is incomplete and ungrammatical. Complete the sentence with subject 'I' and a verb phrase 'like taking pictures here as well' to express current preference. This corrects sentence structure and provides clarity.