Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., saying “I love” several times) and correct minor grammar (word order and articles). Also keep to a maximum of about 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. Last year my father bought me a Canon camera, which has helped me capture both landscapes and portraits clearly. For example, I enjoy photographing rural sunsets and people’s daily activities because they show unique colors and expressions.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct statement of preference, then give two specific supporting details with linking words. Be careful with word choice (city vs. place) and grammar (complete sentences). Avoid hesitations and redundant phrases like “I mean.”

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because the countryside offers more natural landscapes and authentic local culture. For example, when I visited Araku and Paderu in Andhra Pradesh, I captured misty hills and tribal festivals that you rarely see in cities.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, balanced response: state your preference (or say you like both) in one sentence, then explain concisely with a specific reason and an example. Avoid repeating phrases and incorrect collocations (e.g., “fantasy of visiting” → “dream of visiting”). Fix grammar and reduce length to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I enjoy views both in my country and abroad because each offers something different. For instance, Indian monuments like Delhi’s historical sites provide rich cultural scenes, while visiting other countries would let me photograph different architectures and landscapes I haven’t seen yet.

× Of course I love taking pictures of different views.

✓ Of course, I love taking pictures of different views.

Missing comma after introductory phrase 'Of course' is punctuation rather than grammar type list; however treat as article error per allowed list: add comma to improve clarity and naturalness. Suggestion: include a comma after introductory adverbial phrases.

× Recently I asked my father to buy a Canon camera and he bought me one last year, which is the most precious gift till now I have.

✓ Recently I asked my father to buy a Canon camera and he bought me one last year, which is the most precious gift I have received so far.

The clause 'till now I have' is incorrect word order and missing past participle 'received'. Use past participle after 'have' to form present perfect: 'have received'. Also use 'so far' for 'till now' and place 'I have received' after 'gift' for correct sentence structure.

× So I click different pictures.

✓ So I take different pictures.

The verb 'click' in this context is informal and unidiomatic; 'take pictures' is the correct collocation. Also adjust tense consistency: present simple is fine for habitual action.

× I love to take portraits of landscapes and also portraits of human beings.

✓ I love taking landscape photos and portraits of people.

Redundant use of 'portraits of landscapes' is incorrect because 'portrait' typically refers to people; use 'landscape photos' for scenes and 'portraits of people' or 'portraits' for people. Also use gerund 'taking' for parallel structure.

× I just love photography.

✓ I just love photography.

Sentence is grammatically correct; present simple properly expresses a general preference. No change needed.

× When I talk about photography, I love the views of rural areas.

✓ When I talk about photography, I prefer views of rural areas.

Use 'prefer' rather than 'love' when comparing options; 'views of rural areas' is acceptable but 'prefer' better answers 'Do you prefer'. This aligns word choice with question intent.

× I mean the countryside because the landscapes and the culture of the people mainly in Andhra Pradesh.

✓ I mean the countryside because I especially like the landscapes and the local culture in Andhra Pradesh.

Original sentence is fragmented and missing a subject for 'mainly in Andhra Pradesh'. Rephrase to include subject 'I' and adverb 'especially' to clarify meaning and correct word order.

× I have visited few places like Paderu, Araku.

✓ I have visited a few places like Paderu and Araku.

Use 'a few' with plural countable noun to indicate some places; include 'and' between items in a list. Present perfect 'have visited' is appropriate for life experience.

× These are the beautiful cities.

✓ These are beautiful places.

If Paderu and Araku are not cities, calling them 'cities' may be incorrect; 'places' is safer. Also 'the beautiful' is unnecessary; use 'beautiful places' for natural description.

× I mean the beautiful places that I've ever visited and their culture that I've captured through my camera is.

✓ I mean they are the most beautiful places I have ever visited, and I have captured their culture with my camera.

Original sentence has wrong word order and ends with dangling 'is'. Reorder to 'they are the most beautiful places I have ever visited' and use 'I have captured their culture with my camera' for a complete clause.

× I strongly agree on both the sides of the question because I love my country.

✓ I strongly agree with both sides of the question because I love my country.

Correct preposition after 'agree' is 'with', not 'on'. 'Both sides' does not require 'the'. Use 'with both sides' for correct collocation.

× There are many places in India like Delhi is one of the beautiful place I I have witnessed till now and I also love the views of other countries than India because I have a fantasy of visiting different countries and traveling so I would also love views of different countries.

✓ There are many places in India; for example, Delhi is one of the most beautiful places I have seen so far, and I also love views from other countries because I dream of traveling to different countries, so I would also enjoy views from abroad.

Original sentence runs on and has multiple errors: missing articles ('a' before 'beautiful place'), repetition ('I I'), wrong comparative 'than India', and awkward phrasing 'fantasy of visiting'. Break into clauses, use 'one of the most beautiful places', 'seen so far' (present perfect), 'dream of' instead of 'fantasy', and 'views from abroad' to express other countries. Ensure proper punctuation and parallel structure.