Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Correct grammar and make the opening direct; avoid redundancy and keep within 3–4 sentences. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then briefly add two specific supporting details (what you photograph and how you store/share them). Use a linking word to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, absolutely. When I travel I photograph scenic views and local nature because they help me remember special moments, and I especially like capturing sunsets and mountain landscapes. Also, I organize my photos into online albums by trip so I can easily revisit and share my favorite shots with friends.

Gợi ý: Good structure and specific details. Improve cohesion by using clearer linking phrases and correct minor style issues (avoid starting a sentence with 'Like' informally; use 'For example' or 'In the countryside,'). Keep it to three sentences max and refine word choice (e.g., 'long-lasting').

Ví dụ: I don't have a strong preference because each offers something different. In the countryside, for example, I love photographing mountains at sunrise since the soft light creates long-lasting memories and a peaceful mood. In cities, I enjoy capturing lively streets and unique architecture because they offer dynamic scenes and photographic opportunities.

Gợi ý: There is a content error ('music' instead of 'views') and some awkward phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence addressing preference, correct the vocabulary mistake, and give two concrete reasons with a linking word. Keep it concise and natural.

Ví dụ: I don't have a strong preference between my own country and abroad. At home, familiar landscapes and childhood landmarks make the views comforting and meaningful; meanwhile, overseas I enjoy discovering unique architectural styles and cultural atmospheres that broaden my perspective.

× Is absolutely.

✓ It is absolutely.

The sentence is missing the subject 'It' before the verb 'is'. In English, clauses require an explicit subject; starting with 'Is' without a subject creates an incomplete sentence. Use 'It is absolutely' or better: 'Absolutely' or 'Yes, absolutely.' to sound natural.

× I enjoy music in my own country because they feel familiar and often feature landscapes or landmarks I grew up with.

✓ I enjoy music in my own country because it feels familiar and often features landscapes or landmarks I grew up with.

The plural pronoun 'they' does not agree with the singular noun 'music'. Use the singular pronoun 'it' to refer to 'music' and change the verb 'feature' to 'features' for subject-verb agreement. Alternatively, rephrase to 'songs in my country' and use 'they' if plural is intended.