Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course. I like taking pictures of different views because I enjoy preserving good memories. For example, last week I go to the park with my family and we take photos there.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
Actually, I prefer rural views in the countryside. The environment there is more beautiful and peaceful. It can help me relax myself and escape the noise of the city.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
Actually, I prefer views in my own country. The environment there is more beautiful and peaceful. It help me relax myself and escape the noise from the city.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 语法和时态要准确,避免重复信息并使回答更自然。回答应直接点明原因,然后用一两个具体细节支持,句子不要太长或有语法错误。例如将过去事件用正确的过去式表达,并用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because it helps me preserve happy memories. For example, last week I went to a park with my family and took several photos of the lake and the flower beds, which reminded me of that relaxed afternoon.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答总体清晰但有小问题:避免多余词(如“actually”频繁使用),使表达更自然流畅。可以加一两个具体细节说明为什么农村更放松,并用连接词提升连贯性。
Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because the countryside is more peaceful and greener. For instance, the open fields and quiet trails help me unwind after a busy week, and the fresh air makes walks much more enjoyable.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 避免重复前一问题的表述,修正语法错误(如主谓一致和时态),并提供具体原因或比较来丰富内容。可以举一两个本国景色的具体例子以增加说服力。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I'm familiar with the landscapes and cultural settings. For example, the coastal cliffs near my hometown are calming and scenic, and I feel more at ease exploring familiar trails than visiting unknown places abroad.
× For example, last week I go to the park with my family and we take photos there.
✓ For example, last week I went to the park with my family and we took photos there.
错误类型:过去时使用错误。句子描述的是“上周”发生的事情,时间状语表明确应该使用过去时。原句中动词“go”和“take”使用了一般现在时,应该改为过去式“went”和“took”。建议:遇到表示过去时间的词(如last week, yesterday, ago)时,动词要用过去式。
× It can help me relax myself and escape the noise of the city.
✓ It helps me relax and escape the noise of the city.
错误类型:现在时态与用词不当。原句用“can help me”虽然语法可接受,但在此上下文中前后句都用一般现在时描述习惯性事实,更自然用一般现在时“helps”。此外“relax myself”为冗余,英语中常用“relax”而不是“relax myself”。建议:描述习惯或常态时用一般现在时,并省略不必要的反身代词。
× It help me relax myself and escape the noise from the city.
✓ It helps me relax and escape the noise of the city.
错误类型:主谓一致/现在时用法。原句主语为单数“the environment”,应使用第三人称单数动词“helps”,而非“help”。另外同样应去掉多余的反身代词“myself”,并把介词搭配规范为“noise of the city”更地道。建议:注意主语单数时动词加-s;描述习惯性情况用一般现在时;避免不必要的反身代词,并使用固定搭配“noise of the city”。