Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural, concise and clear. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear words. Focus on correct grammar (e.g., plural nouns, verb forms) and vocabulary (e.g., 'scenery', 'moved', 'rural').

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different sceneries because beautiful views make me feel inspired and emotionally moved. For example, I like capturing sunsets and mountain landscapes, which help me remember peaceful moments and share them with friends.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then explain why with specific details and one linking word. Avoid filler and repeated words. Use correct comparative structures and natural adjectives (e.g., 'calmer', 'less crowded').

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views. Because I live in Seoul, I often enjoy quieter countryside scenes since they are calmer and less crowded. For instance, I love walking by rice fields and small villages because they help me relax after a busy week.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then give specific reasons using linking words (e.g., 'because', 'for example'). Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure: use verbs correctly and give concrete examples of what you learn abroad (culture, food, architecture).

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because traveling lets me discover different cultures and landscapes. For example, when I visit Europe I enjoy historic architecture and local markets, which teach me about new traditions and ways of life.

× I like taking picture of different scenery because it makes me feel more exciting and touched my ma my mind.

✓ I like taking pictures of different sceneries because they make me feel more excited and touched in my mind.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' when talking generally. 'Scenery' is usually uncountable, but 'different sceneries' or 'different scenes' can be used to mean distinct views; here 'sceneries' is acceptable colloquially. 'It' should agree with the plural subject, so use 'they make'. 'Exciting' is an adjective that describes something that causes excitement; the correct feeling is 'excited' (a person’s emotion). 'Touched my ma my mind' is unclear; 'touched in my mind' or better 'touched me' is correct. Suggestion: use 'taking pictures of different scenes because they make me feel excited and touched.'

× I like taking picture of different scenery because it makes me feel more exciting and touched my ma my mind.

✓ I like taking pictures of different sceneries because they make me feel more excited and touched.

Using 'more exciting' compares excitement levels but needs a subject that causes excitement; to express the speaker's emotion, use the adjective 'excited'. Remove the unclear phrase 'my ma my mind' and use 'touched' or 'emotionally moved.' Also ensure agreement between subject and verb: 'they make me feel.'

× And I like different scenery such as lular.

✓ And I like different scenery such as rural areas.

The word 'scenery' is uncountable; to list types, use 'different scenery such as rural areas' or 'different scenes such as rural landscapes.' The misspelling 'lular' should be 'rural.' Use plural 'areas' when referring generally to rural places.

× I would say I'm more likely to rural areas because I live in Seoul so my I'm really happy life so I like rural area.

✓ I would say I prefer rural areas because I live in Seoul and I am generally happy with my life, so I like the countryside.

'More likely to rural areas' is ungrammatical; use 'prefer rural areas' or 'more likely to go to rural areas.' Remove redundant 'so' and correct pronoun errors 'my I'm really happy life' to 'I am generally happy with my life.' Use 'rural areas' or 'the countryside' consistently.

× It makes me feel more calm and calm.

✓ It makes me feel calmer and more relaxed.

Repeating 'calm' is awkward. Use comparative 'calmer' to compare feelings and add 'more relaxed' for natural expression. 'More calm' is less natural than 'calmer.'

× I prefer in other countries because I like traveling so because it it learn about many things such as other culture and other other thinking so I love.

✓ I prefer other countries because I like traveling; it helps me learn about many things such as other cultures and different ways of thinking, so I love it.

Do not use 'prefer in other countries'; use 'prefer other countries.' Add a subject for 'learn' ('it helps me learn'). Use plural 'cultures' and the phrase 'ways of thinking' instead of 'other other thinking.' Remove duplicated words and add 'it' at the end: 'so I love it.'

× I prefer in other countries because I like traveling so because it it learn about many things such as other culture and other other thinking so I love.

✓ I prefer other countries because I like traveling; it lets me learn about many things, such as other cultures and different ways of thinking, so I love it.

The original contains redundant conjunctions ('so because'), a missing subject for 'learn', duplicate words ('it it', 'other other'), and incorrect singular nouns. Restructure the sentence to include a clear subject ('it' or 'traveling') and parallel noun phrases ('other cultures' and 'different ways of thinking').