Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (plural/singular, articles), and give specific examples with linking words. Avoid unclear words (e.g., 'Barry') and irrelevant fragments. Aim for 2–4 sentences: a direct answer, one reason, then an example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because I like capturing the atmosphere of a place; for example, I often take photos of dramatic sunsets and city skylines to show how light changes the scene.

Gợi ý: Make your response grammatically correct and more specific. Begin with a clear preference sentence, then give reasons and a brief example. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'for instance' to connect ideas. Replace vague phrases ('it shows atmosphere') with precise descriptions (e.g., 'vibrant energy' or 'interesting contrasts of light and shadow').

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I love city skylines and the lights at night, which give a sense of vibrant energy. For instance, I enjoy photographing neon-lit streets and high-rise buildings because they create strong contrasts and interesting reflections.

Gợi ý: Correct grammar and clarity. Start with a direct statement, then give a clear reason and a concise supporting detail. Fix errors (articles, verb forms, word order) and avoid redundant words. Use one linking word like 'because' and provide a concrete example (a place or landmark).

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I live in Seoul, which has many impressive skyscrapers. For example, I like photographing the Han River with the city skyline at dusk because the lights reflecting on the water look stunning.

× I enjoy taking picture of different views because I love capturing Barry.

✓ I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I love capturing beauty.

The noun 'picture' should be plural after 'taking' so use 'pictures' (singular/plural consistency). 'Capturing Barry' is likely a mistake; context suggests 'beauty'. Use the gerund 'taking' correctly with plural noun and correct noun choice to match meaning.

× The scenery for example coaster sunset and urban skyline.

✓ For example, the scenery includes coastal sunsets and urban skylines.

Original sentence lacks a main verb and has incorrect words ('coaster sunset'). Recast to include a verb 'includes' and correct nouns: 'coastal sunsets' and 'urban skylines'. Also add comma after 'For example' for clarity.

× I would say I'm more likely to urban area because I enjoy skyline and the bright city at night.

✓ I would say I'm more likely to choose urban areas because I enjoy skylines and the bright city at night.

'More likely to urban area' is incorrect preposition and structure. Use 'more likely to choose' or 'prefer' and plural 'urban areas' to match general statement. Also pluralize 'skyline' to 'skylines' when speaking generally.

× It makes me feel more excited and it shows atmosphere.

✓ It makes me feel more excited and creates a lively atmosphere.

'Shows atmosphere' is unnatural; use verb 'creates' and adjective 'lively' to describe atmosphere. This corrects word choice and yields natural collocation.

× I prefer view in my country because my I live in Seoul and my country have has a lot of skyline buildings, so it is really beautiful and huge it makes.

✓ I prefer views in my country because I live in Seoul and my country has a lot of skyscrapers, so it is really beautiful and impressive.

Several errors: use plural 'views' and 'in my country'. Remove extra 'my' before 'I live'. 'Have has' is incorrect; use 'has' for singular 'my country'. 'Skyline buildings' is awkward; use 'skyscrapers' or 'buildings that form the skyline'. 'Huge it makes' is ungrammatical; replace with 'impressive' or 'very impressive' for natural meaning.