Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and personal, but a bit wordy and slightly repetitive. Begin with a concise topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word or phrase. Avoid redundant phrases (e.g., "later look through them to reminisce" repeats "help me remember"). Also keep sentences varied and grammatical.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because it helps me remember special trips. For example, I visit my sister only once a year, so I take photos of our outings; later I look at them to recall the atmosphere and small moments we shared.

Gợi ý: The answer states a clear preference but contains grammatical errors and minor redundancy. Use a concise topic sentence, then give specific examples and use linking words. Correct grammar (remove "where which"), and avoid repeating similar ideas ("more greenery" and "more open spaces" can be combined).

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they offer more greenery and wide open spaces. For example, I enjoy going to the mountains or the coast, where the fresh air and natural scenery feel very relaxing.

Gợi ý: Good structure and clear reasons. Improve by making the topic sentence a bit more direct and by correcting singular/plural agreement ("foreign view" -> "foreign views"). Add a concise supporting detail with a linking phrase to strengthen coherence.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because traveling abroad lets me discover new landscapes. For example, I travel internationally about once a year, and I find foreign views more exciting since they often reflect different cultures and unique natural features.

× I prefer views in rural areas because there is more greenery and more open spaces to look at. I like going to the mountains or the ocean where which are in the rural areas.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because there is more greenery and more open space to look at. I like going to the mountains or the ocean, which are in rural areas.

Two issues: first, 'open spaces' is acceptable but 'open space' is more natural in this context; this is an adjective/noun choice (related to incorrect use of adjectives or nouns), but falls under sentence structure here. Second, the clause 'where which are in the rural areas' incorrectly combines two relative markers ('where' and 'which'). Use either 'which are' or 'that are' or 'in rural areas' without 'where'. Also drop the article before 'rural areas' when speaking generally. Suggestion: use a single relative pronoun and avoid redundant articles: 'the mountains or the ocean, which are in rural areas.'

× For example, I only visit my sister once a year, so I often take photos of her outings and later look through them to reminisce about those days.

✓ For example, I only visit my sister once a year, so I often take photos of her outings and later look through them to reminisce about those days.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No correction is necessary. Keep verb forms and quantifiers as they are. (Included to show no change required.)

× I prefer the scenery in other countries because I usually travel abroad once a year and enjoy seeing landscapes I haven't visited before. For example, I love exploring different cultures and natural sights, which makes foreign view more exciting than familiar ones at home.

✓ I prefer the scenery in other countries because I usually travel abroad once a year and enjoy seeing landscapes I haven't visited before. For example, I love exploring different cultures and natural sights, which makes foreign views more exciting than familiar ones at home.

The phrase 'foreign view' is uncountable/incorrect here. Use the plural 'foreign views' or 'a foreign view' depending on meaning. Since comparing multiple scenes, 'foreign views' fits. Also 'scenery' already used correctly earlier. Suggestion: use plural 'views' when referring to various sights: 'foreign views more exciting.'