Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Uh, actually I prefer to take a picture of. And then Skype when I when I drive. When I drive to Japan, I'd like to take photos.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
In my view, I choose rural areas. I thought I'm a silent man. I I'd like to live in a silence and remote.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
Oh, I preferred in other countries, especially I like Japan.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 你的回答不够清晰且有语法和表达错误,需要更直接地回应问题并提供具体细节。建议: 1) 开门见山回答问题(肯定或否定)并给出原因; 2) 使用连词(because, so, when)连接句子,以增强逻辑; 3) 避免不必要的重复和犹豫词(uh, um); 4) 提供具体情景或例子(比如拍摄风景的时间、地点或喜欢的主题)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography helps me remember places. For example, when I travel to Japan I often photograph city streets and temple gardens in the morning because the light is soft and there are fewer people.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答意图明确但表达不自然且有语法问题。建议: 1) 直接给出选择并解释原因; 2) 用恰当的形容词和短语(quiet, peaceful, countryside)替换不自然表达; 3) 用连接词(because, so)衔接原因; 4) 提供具体细节或对比(比如举例说明乡村的特点)。
Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because they are quieter and more peaceful. For example, in the countryside I can enjoy green fields and fresh air, which helps me relax compared with noisy city streets.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答简短但可理解,需补充原因和具体细节以显得更自然。建议: 1) 明确时态和语法(use present tense: I prefer); 2) 说明原因(culture, scenery, architecture); 3) 提供具体例子或比较(举出喜欢日本哪些景色或城市); 4) 使用连接词(for example, because)丰富回答。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries, especially Japan, because its mix of traditional temples and modern cityscapes is very attractive. For example, I love photographing Kyoto's old streets and Tokyo's neon-lit neighborhoods because they offer very different atmospheres.
× Uh, actually I prefer to take a picture of. And then Skype when I when I drive. When I drive to Japan, I'd like to take photos.
✓ Uh, actually I prefer taking pictures. And then Skype while I drive. When I drive to Japan, I'd like to take photos.
问题类型:动词+ -ing 形式或动词形式使用错误。解释(简体中文):句子中“prefer to take a picture of”用法不自然,通常“prefer”后可接动名词表示偏好习惯,且“take a picture of”需有宾语,被截断了。建议改为“prefer taking pictures”。另外“And then Skype when I when I drive”中时态和连词不当,建议用“Skype while I drive”(表示在开车时用 Skype ——注意实际安全问题,但语法这样表达)。总体建议:prefer 后接动名词;使用 while 表示两个同时发生的动作。
× In my view, I choose rural areas. I thought I'm a silent man. I I'd like to live in a silence and remote.
✓ In my view, I prefer rural areas. I think I'm a quiet person. I'd like to live in a peaceful, remote place.
问题类型:现在时使用不当与形容词/名词搭配错误。解释(简体中文):1) “I choose rural areas”听起来像当前选择行为,用 prefer 更符合偏好表达。2) “I thought I'm a silent man”时态混用,“thought”是过去时但后面接现在时“I'm”不一致,应使用现在时“I think I'm...”表示现在的看法。3) “a silent man”用词不自然,通常用“quiet person”或“peaceful”来表达安静;“live in a silence and remote”结构不正确,silent 是形容词但“a silence”是名词,且“and remote”需要修饰名词。建议改为“a peaceful, remote place”。
× Oh, I preferred in other countries, especially I like Japan.
✓ Oh, I prefer other countries, especially Japan.
问题类型:过去时使用错误。解释(简体中文):原句使用“preferred”为过去时,但句意是表达现在的偏好,应使用现在时“prefer”。另外“preferred in other countries”中介词“in”多余,直接说“prefer other countries”。“especially I like Japan”语序臃肿,简化为“especially Japan”。建议统一使用现在时表达当前偏好。