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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

I seldom taking, I seldom take pictures because I like writing. I think it's another kind of taking pictures of different view, uh, like different seasons, different time of the day and.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

I prefer using urban areas because I think they are the reflection of of, uh, human development. And I love the atmosphere of warm and hot.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

Countries I prefer stay in my own country because it's more convenient and cost effective. And by the way, I can watch the differences between uh, people in my city and others. I can watch the different culture, uh, habits and uh.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并直接回应问题;注意语法(例如时态和动词形式),避免重复,并用一到两句支持细节说明原因或举例。可以用连接词使表达更连贯。例:先给主题句表明喜好或不喜好,然后用because/for example说明具体原因。

Ví dụ: I rarely take photos because I prefer writing. Writing lets me capture scenes and moods in words, such as the way different seasons or times of day change a place, so I don’t feel the need to photograph them.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 回答需要更准确的词汇与句子结构,避免口头语和重复(例如 'of of'、'uh')。说明喜欢城市景观的具体原因并用连接词扩展,如举例说明城市中哪些元素吸引你(建筑、夜景等)。

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because cities reflect human development and creativity. For example, I enjoy skyscrapers, lively street scenes and night lights, which all create a warm and energetic atmosphere.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁有条理,先给明确观点(prefer my own country),然后用具体细节支持(convenience, cost, cultural observation),避免填充词和重复。用连接词(for example, because, and)把细节组织起来。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it’s more convenient and cost-effective. For example, I can travel shorter distances and save money, and I also enjoy observing regional cultural habits and local lifestyles up close.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× I seldom taking, I seldom take pictures because I like writing.

I seldom take pictures because I like writing.

句中“I seldom taking”使用了动词-ing形式,但在频率副词seldom后面应使用动词原形(或第三人称加-s,根据主语),正确用法是“I seldom take”。建议:在频率副词后使用动词原形,如“I rarely go”或“I often watch”。

Sentence structure errors

× I think it's another kind of taking pictures of different view, uh, like different seasons, different time of the day and.

I think it's another kind of photography of different views, like different seasons and different times of the day.

原句结构混乱,使用了不合适的短语“taking pictures of different view”且“view”应为复数,句尾的“and”也不完整。建议:使用更恰当的名词短语如“photography”并把可数名词复数化,连接并列项时保证完整。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prefer using urban areas because I think they are the reflection of of, uh, human development.

I prefer urban areas because I think they reflect human development.

“prefer using urban areas”中不需要使用动名词“using”;此外“the reflection of human development”用法啰嗦且双重冠词错误(“the reflection of of”有重复),更自然的表达是“they reflect human development”。建议:直接说“I prefer urban areas”并用动词reflect代替“are the reflection of”。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× And I love the atmosphere of warm and hot.

And I love the warm atmosphere.

“the atmosphere of warm and hot”在形容词使用上不自然且重复意思。应使用“warm atmosphere”或“hot atmosphere”,通常描述氛围用“warm”。建议:用单一形容词修饰名词,并把形容词放在名词前。

Sentence structure errors

× Countries I prefer stay in my own country because it's more convenient and cost effective.

I prefer to stay in my own country because it's more convenient and cost-effective.

句首出现“Countries”显得多余且错误;动词短语需使用不定式“prefer to stay”或短语“prefer staying”。此外“cost effective”作复合形容词修饰前面的内容应带连字符。建议:去掉多余词并使用正确的不定式或动名词形式。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× And by the way, I can watch the differences between uh, people in my city and others.

And by the way, I can see the differences between people in my city and those in other places.

动词“watch”用于观察人或差异不自然,通常用“see”或“notice”。“others”作代词不够具体,改为“those in other places”。建议:用更准确的动词并明确比较对象。

Incorrect use of nouns / Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I can watch the different culture, uh, habits and uh.

I can observe different cultures and habits.

“watch the different culture, habits”中“culture”应为复数“cultures”,并且“watch”不适合一般指文化或习惯的观察,改用“observe”。句尾的“and”不完整。建议:把可数名词复数化,使用合适动词,并列举时保持完整。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
HotHeated; Very warm; Feverish; Spicy; Fierce
WarmBalmy; Heated; Thick; Friendly; Heat (up)
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