Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答要更有条理，先给出明确的主题句，然后用1–2句具体描绘细节，并使用连接词使句子连贯。注意避免重复（例如重复使用“and”）以及语法错误（如不完整的从句）。可描述时间、色彩变化和拍摄原因以充实内容。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing views, especially my school at sunset. For example, after class the sky often turns yellow or pink, and the warm light highlights the campus buildings, so I like capturing those changing colours to remember the calm atmosphere.

Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁流畅，减少填充词（如“uh”）并用连接词把理由组织好。给出具体例子说明为何城市景观让你有归属感或安全感，例如街头活动、咖啡店或夜景。确保句子完整且避免重复短语。

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the social interactions they offer. For instance, busy streets, cafés and evening markets make me feel involved in the community and give me a sense of safety.

Gợi ý: 回答时先直接表明偏好，然后给出两到三个具体原因并用连接词连接。避免语法错误（如时态和单复数），删除多余的填充词，并把“tradition and modern”更自然地表达为“traditional and modern elements”。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I know the culture well and appreciate the mix of old and new. For example, you can see ancient temples next to modern skyscrapers, which creates a unique and familiar landscape I enjoy photographing.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of my school view like a when I finished class at the sunset of my school is a very beautiful and and sometimes a yellow, sometimes pink sometimes.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of the view of my school, for example after I finish class at sunset. My school looks very beautiful then — sometimes yellow, sometimes pink.

错误类型：动词 + -ing 及句子结构混用问题。学生原句中有多处结构混乱："like taking pictures of my school view like a when I finished class" 使用了重复的 'like'，时态不一致（"finished" 应与习惯动作搭配用一般现在时或非限定从句），并且多处多余或重复词（两个"and"、多余的"sometimes"）。建议将句子拆成两句，第一句用现在时表示习惯（I like taking pictures ... after I finish class），第二句描述景色并用简单形容词短语（sometimes yellow, sometimes pink）。简化并规范时态和从句结构可以提高可理解性。

× I prefer views in urban areas because I like, uh, I like the feeling of interactions between people.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because I like the feeling of interaction between people.

错误类型：主谓一致/名词形式不当。原句中使用复数名词短语 "interactions" 在此处做泛指时更常用不可数名词 "interaction" 或单数泛指形式 "the feeling of interaction"。将其改为单数/不可数可以使短语更自然。

× I think, uh, I get a feeling of involvement in the society and I feel this makes feel safe.

✓ I think I get a feeling of involvement in society, and this makes me feel safe.

错误类型：句子结构错误与代词缺失。原句中 "makes feel safe" 缺少宾语（应为 'me'），并且 "in the society" 在英文中常用简洁表达 "in society"。另外存在多余的助词/停顿词（uh）。需要补上缺失的代词并调整词序以符合英语常规表达。

× I put views in my own country because I'm familiar with a Chinese traditional culture and we also have skyscrapers.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because I'm familiar with Chinese traditional culture, and we also have skyscrapers.

错误类型：代词/词语使用错误。学生原句使用了错误的动词 "put"（应为 'prefer' 表达偏好），并且在 "a Chinese traditional culture" 中不需要不定冠词 'a'，应为不可数或抽象名词短语 "Chinese traditional culture"。修正动词和去掉多余冠词后句子更地道。

× Uh, we have a combination of tradition and uh, modern area.

✓ We have a combination of tradition and modernity.

错误类型：形容词/名词使用不当。原句 "modern area" 与上下文不搭配，且语义重复。更自然的表达是用名词 "modernity" 与 "tradition" 对比，或说 "traditional and modern areas"。建议根据语境选择对等的词类（名词对名词或形容词对形容词）。

× Uh, I think I'm familiar with both of them aspect.

✓ I think I'm familiar with both aspects.

错误类型：句子结构错误与搭配不当。原句 "both of them aspect" 结构不正确，应该使用 "both aspects" 或者 "both of them"（后者后面不能再接名词）。建议使用 "both aspects" 表示熟悉两方面。