Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
No, I'm not interested in taking pictures actually and forget to taking pictures when I'm out most of the time I prefer I prefer the enjoy enjoying the rules by my eyes.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I think it depends on my mood. Sometimes I like setting rules, at other times I like you see in my countryside both is nice.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
Umm sorry I can't answer you because I never go to abroad. I just tell you I like the rules in my country. Uh, I may I might have a different use when I say the use board.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接、句子更简洁并纠正语法错误。可以先给出明确的主题句,然后用一两句解释原因,避免重复和错误用词。注意动词形式和冠词,像“forget to take pictures”、“enjoy the views”。可以加一两个连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: No, I don't usually take pictures of views. I often forget my camera when I'm out, and I prefer to enjoy the scenery with my own eyes rather than photograph it.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答应更清晰并修正错误表达。先给出直接回答(depends on my mood),然后用连词展开具体对比并给出具体原因或例子。避免语句碎片和错误词汇,如“setting rules”、“you see in my countryside”。
Ví dụ: It depends on my mood. Sometimes I prefer urban views because I enjoy the lively streets and modern architecture, while at other times I like rural scenery for its peace and natural beauty.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答要避免道歉和含混不清。先直接回答喜欢本国或可能两者都喜欢,然后说明原因或假设情形。纠正词汇与语法错误,例如“go abroad”、“rural”而不是“rules/ use board”。保持一句主题句和一两句支持细节。
Ví dụ: I prefer the views in my own country because I know them well and feel a strong connection to the landscapes. However, if I travelled abroad, I would be curious to see different scenery and cultures.
× No, I'm not interested in taking pictures actually and forget to taking pictures when I'm out most of the time I prefer I prefer the enjoy enjoying the rules by my eyes.
✓ No, I'm not interested in taking pictures actually and forget to take pictures when I'm out. Most of the time I prefer to enjoy the views with my own eyes.
句中“forget to taking”是不正确的动词结构。动词“forget”后若接不定式应使用“to + 动词原形”,因此应为“forget to take”。另外,句子过长且有重复(“I prefer I prefer the enjoy enjoying”),需要简化为“Most of the time I prefer to enjoy the views with my own eyes.” 此外用“views”比“rules/rows”更合适(推测原意为“views”)。建议:复习动词后接不定式(to + 原形)与动名词(-ing)的用法区别;写作时检查重复词并分句以保持清晰。
× I think it depends on my mood. Sometimes I like setting rules, at other times I like you see in my countryside both is nice.
✓ I think it depends on my mood. Sometimes I like city views; at other times I prefer the scenery in my countryside. Both are nice.
原句结构混乱且包含词汇错误。“I like setting rules” 和 “I like you see in my countryside” 语义不明确,可能把“scenery/views”写错为“rules”或“you see”。需要改为清晰的并列句:用分号或句号连接两种偏好,并用“Both are nice”总结。建议:保证句子主谓宾完整,避免把口语中匆忙的表达直接写成句子;分句表达不同观点时使用连接词(e.g. at other times, sometimes)并保持一致的句子结构。
× Umm sorry I can't answer you because I never go to abroad. I just tell you I like the rules in my country. Uh, I may I might have a different use when I say the use board.
✓ Umm, sorry I can't answer you because I have never gone abroad. I just want to say I like the views in my country. Uh, I might feel differently when I speak about abroad.
句中“go to abroad”是不正确的固定搭配,正确为“go abroad”或完成时“have never gone abroad”。此外“the rules”与“the use board”明显为词汇或拼写错误,应为“the views”及“abroad”相关表达。还存在混乱的时态和表达,应使用现在完成时表达“从未去过国外”。建议:学习固定搭配(如go abroad,不用to),注意现在完成时表经历(have never gone),并检查常用词汇拼写与含义。