Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Correct small grammar mistakes, make the response more natural and concise, and add a brief reason or example. Use a clear topic sentence, one linking word, and avoid contradictions. For instance, change “I'm not running into photography” to “I'm not really into photography,” and fix “my photos really turned out well” to convey intended meaning (likely “don’t” or “rarely do”).

Ví dụ: To be honest, I'm not really into photography. I prefer to enjoy the moment instead of stopping to take pictures, because I find it breaks the atmosphere. Also, I'm not very skilled with a camera, so my photos rarely turn out well.

Gợi ý: This answer is clear and relevant but has a repetition and could be slightly tightened and enriched with a specific detail or example using a linking phrase. Remove repeated words and add one specific image or activity to make it more vivid.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because city life surrounds me during the week. For example, at the weekend I often go to the countryside to relax, walk in green fields and listen to birdsong, which helps me recharge.

Gợi ý: Fix small grammar and connector errors and make the points more precise. Replace “Besides or traveling abroad is not so much convenient and is much more expensive” with a clear linked reason. Add a short specific example of a place at home to support the preference.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it is vast and offers everything from mountains to beaches. Moreover, traveling abroad is less convenient and more expensive for me; for instance, I can easily visit nearby coastal areas on a long weekend.

× To be honest, I'm not running into photography.

✓ To be honest, I'm not into photography.

The phrase 'running into' is incorrect here. The correct idiom is 'into' to express interest (be into something). Use the simple adjective 'into' after 'be' rather than the present participle verb phrase 'running into'. Suggestion: learn common 'be into' collocations (e.g., 'I'm into music').

× I'd like to enjoy the moment rather than stopping to take pictures.

✓ I prefer to enjoy the moment rather than stop to take pictures.

Mixing 'I'd like' with 'rather than stopping' is awkward for expressing a general preference. Use 'prefer to' + base verb, or 'would rather' + base verb. Here 'prefer to enjoy... rather than stop...' keeps tense and form consistent. Suggestion: use parallel infinitive forms for clear comparisons (prefer to X rather than Y).

× Besides, I'm not so good at taking pictures, so my photos really turned out well.

✓ Besides, I'm not so good at taking pictures, so my photos don't turn out well.

The original uses past tense 'turned' which conflicts with the present-tense context 'I'm not so good'. Use present simple negative 'don't turn out well' to describe a habitual result. Suggestion: match time reference—use present simple for habitual outcomes ('my photos don't turn out well').

× My company is located in the city, so I spend most of the week surrounded by urban scenery.

✓ My company is located in the city, so I spend most of the week surrounded by urban scenery.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct. Included to indicate checked sentence.

× At the weekend I'd like I'd like to go to the countryside to relax and enjoy the peaceful green landscapes.

✓ At the weekend I'd like to go to the countryside to relax and enjoy the peaceful green landscapes.

The sentence contains a duplicated phrase 'I'd like I'd like'. Remove the extra repetition. Suggestion: read aloud to catch accidental repetitions.

× Besides or traveling abroad is not so much convenient and is much more expensive.

✓ Besides, traveling abroad is not very convenient and is much more expensive.

The original has 'or' which is incorrect; use a comma after 'Besides' and 'not very convenient' is the natural phrasing. Also 'so much convenient' is unidiomatic; use 'very' or 'so' before adjectives without 'much'. Suggestion: use 'not very convenient' or 'not so convenient' and remove the stray 'or'.