Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I'd like to take pictures of different views because I want to other people know who I am just by show my person in different views and I think each could let others know my characteristics.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
On April 4 views in urban areas because I'm living in the urban city since I'm a child and I know the urban areas culture and. Umm, climate.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
Yes, that's sure. Uh, in my country I like to take photos because I want to, uh, show the other people, uh, how my country is. And in the other countries I like to take a photo just to confirm I have lived in here.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接和简洁,先给出明确的主题句,然后用一两句具体原因或例子支持。注意语法(主谓一致、代词使用)和词汇搭配,避免重复表达。可以练习用简单句和连接词(because, so, for example)来组织答案。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different scenes because each picture can express a part of my personality. For example, I often take photos of busy markets to show my energetic side, and of quiet parks to show that I also appreciate calm and nature.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答要直接指出偏好并给出清晰理由,避免无关或模糊的信息(例如‘On April 4’看起来是错误)。注意时态和句子完整性,用连接词(because, since, so)把原因连起来。可以用一两句具体例子说明喜欢城市或乡村的哪些特征。
Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I grew up in the city and feel comfortable with its culture and climate. For example, I like photographing city streets at night because the lights and crowded squares create lively scenes.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答要明确比较两者并给出具体原因,避免含糊或重复表达。先说明偏好(own country or other countries or both),然后用细节支持(例如文化特色、纪念意义)。尽量减少填充词(uh, um)并使用连词(and, but, however)。
Ví dụ: I mostly prefer taking photos in my own country because I want to share its culture and landscapes with others. However, when I travel abroad I also take pictures to record my experiences and prove I have visited those places.
× Yes, I'd like to take pictures of different views because I want to other people know who I am just by show my person in different views and I think each could let others know my characteristics.
✓ Yes, I'd like to take pictures of different views because I want other people to know who I am just by showing myself in different views, and I think each photo can let others know my characteristics.
本句主要问题是不正确的动词形式和不定式用法: - “want to other people know” 应为 “want other people to know”,英语中动词 want 后面接宾语 + to + 动词原形(宾语不定式)。 - “by show my person” 应为 “by showing myself” 或 “by showing my face/personality”。使用 by 引导的方式状语要用动名词(-ing 形式),且反身代词 myself 用来指代“我自己”。 - “each could let” 更自然为 “each photo can let” 或 “each one can let”,需明确指代并调整情态动词与语气以表达可能性或能力。 建议:熟记常见动词后面接动词不定式还是动名词的用法;使用 by + -ing 表示方式;反身代词用于强调动作作用于主语自身。
× On April 4 views in urban areas because I'm living in the urban city since I'm a child and I know the urban areas culture and. Umm, climate.
✓ I prefer views in urban areas because I've been living in the city since I was a child and I know the urban culture and climate.
本句存在多个问题,符合主谓一致与词语使用错误: - 原句开头 “On April 4 views” 无意义且词序错误,意为“我更喜欢城市景观”,应使用 I prefer views in urban areas。 - “I'm living in the urban city since I'm a child” 时态不正确,应使用现在完成时表示从过去到现在持续发生的动作:I've been living in the city since I was a child(注意 since 后常接具体时间或过去的时间点/事件,用过去式 was)。 - “urban areas culture and. Umm, climate.” 中缺少连词和名词结构,应为 “urban culture and climate”。 建议:用现在完成进行时或现在完成时表达从过去持续到现在的状态;注意 since 后用过去式;整理句子避免多余词(如 urban city 重复)。
× Yes, that's sure. Uh, in my country I like to take photos because I want to, uh, show the other people, uh, how my country is. And in the other countries I like to take a photo just to confirm I have lived in here.
✓ Yes, certainly. In my country I like to take photos because I want to show other people what my country is like. In other countries I like to take photos to prove that I have been here.
本句主要问题是代词和动词形式使用不当: - “that's sure” 更自然为 “certainly” 或 “that's for sure”。 - “show the other people, uh, how my country is” 应为 “show other people what my country is like” 或 “show other people how my country is”,更地道的结构是 what ... is like 表示某地的样子。去掉不必要的定冠词 the。 - “in the other countries” 多余定冠词,改为 “in other countries”。 - “take a photo just to confirm I have lived in here” 时态和表达不准确:如果想表达“证明我来过这里”应使用现在完成时/progressive 或完成式短语,且不与 here 连用 have lived in here;更自然为 “to prove that I have been here” 或 “to show that I have visited here”。 建议:注意定冠词的使用(other countries 不用 the);使用 what ... is like 表达“是什么样的”;证明来过某地常用 I have been here / I have visited here。