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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

I like some views and take photo. There's the You will win in the picture will be beautiful and colorful.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

The above is the above all at luck, but the urban, well, maybe like busy.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

In other countries will have different view you can see and in my own country you usually see it will not be.

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Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答缺乏连贯性和清晰的表达,句子结构不完整,词汇使用不准确。建议先用一句主题句直接回答问题,然后补充一到两句具体原因或例子,用连接词(because, so, for example)使表达更连贯。注意动词时态和名词复数形式,以及避免无意义短语。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they can be very beautiful and colorful. For example, I often photograph sunsets and city skylines because the light and colors create interesting contrasts.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 回答含糊且有重复词,未给出明确偏好或理由。建议先明确表达偏好(urban or rural),然后用一两句解释理由并举例。使用连词(because, although, while)连接主观点和解释,避免口头填充词。

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the energy and variety of city life. For example, I like photographing busy streets and modern buildings, which offer interesting shapes and lights.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达不流畅,语法错误较多,信息重复。建议先给出明确偏好(other countries),然后说明原因并提供具体例子或比较,用连接词(because, than, for example)组织句子,注意句子完整性。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer different landscapes and cultures. For example, when I traveled abroad I saw unique architecture and natural scenery that I don't usually see at home.

Ngữ pháp

8: Verb + -ing form

× I like some views and take photo.

I like some views and taking photos.

句中含有 like,表示喜好时常用动名词(verb + -ing)作宾语;另外 photo 需用复数或加冠词。建议把 take 改为 taking,并将 photo 变为复数 photos,或使用 take photos 改为 like taking photos。这样更自然且语法正确。

26: Sentence structure errors

× There's the You will win in the picture will be beautiful and colorful.

The picture will be beautiful and colorful.

原句结构混乱,包含多余的短语“There's the You will win”,没有清晰主谓结构。将句子简化为主语 + 谓语 + 表语的结构(The picture will be beautiful and colorful)即可。注意保持时态一致。

26: Sentence structure errors

× The above is the above all at luck, but the urban, well, maybe like busy.

It depends on luck, but urban areas are maybe busier.

原句逻辑和结构混乱,缺少明确主语和谓语,且用词不当。用 It depends on luck 表示“这取决于运气”,并把 urban 用复数 areas,比较级 busier 更符合“更忙”的意思,保证语句通顺。

6: Present tense issue

× In other countries will have different view you can see and in my own country you usually see it will not be.

In other countries you can see different views, which you usually cannot see in my own country.

原句时态与语序不正确,英语中不把 will 放在主句表陈述事实;此外从句连接和否定位置错误。用一般现在时表达常识性陈述:you can see different views;并用 which 引导定语从句,及 cannot 放在助动词后用于否定。中文建议:用一般现在时,注意从句位置和否定助动词。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BeautifulAttractive
BusyOccupied; Unavailable; Hectic
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
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