Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course, because I think UMM taking picture is my habit and when I look back to those pictures I will. UMM feels very happy and that moment was very beautiful.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I think I prefer urban areas because I think it is spectacular and modern and and that made me feels time slow and I think I'd very enjoy that moment.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I think I will choose other countries because I will grow up in the same place, so when I see other countries landscapes I will feel big surprise and happiness.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 答题要更直接并保持句子简洁。避免重复填充词(例如“UMM”)并完成句子意思。可以先给出明确的主题句,然后用一两句具体细节支持(什么时候拍、拍什么、为什么让你开心),总长度不超过5句。注意语法时态和人称一致。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I often take photos of landscapes and city scenes because it has become a habit. When I look back at those pictures, they make me feel happy and remind me of special moments. For example, I recently photographed a sunset on the beach which felt very peaceful.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要简洁且逻辑清楚。避免重复“I think”,用连接词使句子连贯(例如“because”后给出具体原因和一个例子)。注意主谓一致和形容词、副词用法(例如“feel”而不是“feels”)。
Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because the modern architecture and bright lights are spectacular. For example, walking through a city at night makes me slow down and enjoy the atmosphere, especially when I see illuminated skyscrapers.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 需要更自然地表达原因并补充具体细节。用过去和现在时态准确表达经历(例如“I grew up”而不是“I will grow up”)。说明为什么其他国家的风景让你惊喜,并举一个具体例子来支撑观点。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I grew up in the same area and foreign landscapes often surprise me. For instance, I felt amazed when I first saw the Swiss Alps — the scenery and scale were completely different from what I usually see at home.
× Yes, of course, because I think UMM taking picture is my habit and when I look back to those pictures I will. UMM feels very happy and that moment was very beautiful.
✓ Yes, of course, because I think taking pictures is my habit, and when I look back at those pictures I feel very happy; those moments were very beautiful.
问题类型:26(句子结构错误)。 解释(简体中文):原句中“UMM taking picture is my habit”结构不正确,动名词和名词复数形式使用错误;“when I look back to those pictures I will. UMM feels very happy”句子不完整且代词/停顿词(UMM)混入,导致断句混乱。改为“taking pictures is my habit”用动名词作主语并用复数“pictures”;“look back at”是固定搭配;把“will”去掉改为一般现在时“feel”,因为描述习惯与感受;用分号或逗号连接句子,使句子流畅。建议:说话时避免无意义的填充词(如“UMM”)写作时注意动名词短语和复数名词的正确形式,使用固定搭配“look back at”。
× I think I prefer urban areas because I think it is spectacular and modern and and that made me feels time slow and I think I'd very enjoy that moment.
✓ I prefer urban areas because I think they are spectacular and modern, and they make me feel that time slows down; I would really enjoy that moment.
问题类型:27(主谓一致错误)。 解释(简体中文):原句把复数名词“urban areas”对应为单数代词“it”,应使用复数代词“they”;“made me feels time slow”时态和动词形式错误,应为一般现在或现在时描述感觉,且“make someone feel”结构中动词用原形“feel”;“time slow”需要改为短语“time slows down”或“time feel slow”,更自然;“I'd very enjoy”结构错误,应为“I would really enjoy”。建议:注意名词单复数与代词/动词一致,使用正确的动词形式和常见短语“time slows down”、“really enjoy”。
× I think I will choose other countries because I will grow up in the same place, so when I see other countries landscapes I will feel big surprise and happiness.
✓ I would choose other countries because I grew up in the same place, so when I see landscapes from other countries I feel very surprised and happy.
问题类型:7(将来时错误)。 解释(简体中文):原句多次使用将来时“will”,但说的是一般偏好和对过去经历的说明,更适合使用过去或条件式与一般现在时:因为“我在同一个地方长大”是过去事实,应使用过去时“grew up”;表述偏好可用“would choose”或现在时“I choose”;“I will feel big surprise”不自然,应改为“I feel very surprised and happy”或“I would feel very surprised and happy”。另外“other countries landscapes”名词顺序错误,应该是“landscapes from other countries”或“other countries' landscapes”。建议:区分过去事实、一般事实与将来假设,使用正确时态;复合名词短语注意所有格或介词短语。